The Universe

The Universe

A Poem by Too Poetic
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The wonders of beyond.

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The universe, an archaic,
ancient mystery.
Insolvable, neither by you nor I.
And Although, we might know its history.
Do we genuinely know the secrets,
which lie inside?

Many foreign galaxies, occupied with
Many exotic planets.
Galaxies Inhabited with many stars.
Stars that shine brighter than our very own sun.
Worlds unheard or unseen, worlds unknown,
A wild iridescent yonder.

Thence from the dawn of time,
Mankind has perpetually pondered,
Has perpetually wondered,
In this wild universe of iridescent galaxies,
If he truly is, all alone.
Alone, In this archaic, ancient,
mystery of unknown.

© 2016 Too Poetic


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Beautifully executed. The mystery of the universe will forever inspire the mind. Your use of language is both fluid and candid.

"In this wild universe of iridescent galaxies"

I couldn't have said it better myself.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Too Poetic

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much, a bit late on the reply though I've been offline for too many, I thank you for yo.. read more

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Added on October 3, 2016
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Too Poetic
Too Poetic

St.Paul, MN



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I grew up in the inner city, I started writing poetry at a young age to help relieve the feelings I felt growing up. Life is never easy, but writing poetry helped me identify myself, it helped me see .. more..

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