FALL NOT INLOVE

Dear MAN

 

Fall not inlove with this hair of mine,

for one day it will grow grey.

fall not inlove with this smile of mine

Cause oneday these snow white teeth shall fall out.

Dont be woed by this personality

Neither should you dream of these eyes,

Dont even salivate over my body,

Nor should you wish to hold my heart,

For all of this shall never be yours forever.

 

Dust to dust will be my fate one day.

Fall not inlove with me,

For this is who i am temporarily.

Fall not inlove with me, if you are not going to help welcome age.

Fall not inlove with me if you cant embrace change,

For i am not my appearance.

 

YOURS sincerly currently gorgeous girl.

 

Reviews

[Robin]

Nicely done. So much more important to look for inner beauty as we all change day by day. Loved the message of this piece.

[Poetic-pRiNcEsS]

thank you :)

[Infurno-Blaze]

this is beautiful work. It made me smile and want to fall inlove..lol..it is well written, very emotional and catchy...# im inlove. Lol.

[Poetic-pRiNcEsS]

tnx lol...words fail me but thanx

[Izzy-01]

its a nice one tragic though that in ur poem the ability to love seems to be governed by an inevitable occurance we are all going to face. i like it cause u looked at it from a different perspective : ) ......thank goodness we live for today and not tomorrow right....