HAVE HOPE

THIS POEM IS FOR THE HOPELESS AND ALL THOSE THAT HAVE THOSE HOPELESS MOMENTS EVERY NOW AND THEN

HAVE HOPE FOR TOMORROW WILL BE BETTER,

YOUR TROUBLES WILL EVAPORATE INTO THIN AIR,

THE GRACE OF GOD SHALL SHINE OVER YOU, 

LOVE WILL PENETRATE THROUGH YOUR FRUSTRATIONS

AND WARM YOUR HEART,

TLL THE COLD ESCAPES.

 

HAVE HOPE FOR ONEDAY YOUR TEARS SHALL DRY,

YOUR SORROW WILL BE TURNED INTO JOY,

YOUR SHORTCOMINGS WILL BE OVER SHADDOWED BY SUCCESS,

HAVE HOPE FOR YOUR DREAMS WILL COME TRUE,

HAVE HOPE,

LIVE HOPE,

BREATH HOPE,

BE HOPE.

Author's Note

HAVE HOPE, LIVE HOPE, BE HOPE.

Reviews

[BlackPrince]

I must say: this is a wonderful poem of encouragement and optimism.

But as a fellow writer to another, giving honest and constructive criticism, I'd kindly advise you to not write your entire poem(s) in capital letters. Just like people who write full poems in multicolors like the rainbow, rather than plain black and white,
it can be distracting and detract readers from taking the poem and poet seriously to fully grasp the core message.

The structure and layout, as well as the first impression readers have, of a poem matters.

You, as aspiring journalist, should take a professional attitude toward each and every aspect of writing as a craft, whilst still being creative
(as I clearly see you are).

And also pay careful and conscious attention to Vocabulary and Grammar, especially correct sentencing and punctuation.

Example:

'Have hope, for tomorrow will be better.
Your troubles will evaporate into thin air.
The Grace of God shall shine over you.
Love will penetrate through your frustrations
and warm your heart
till the cold escapes.

Have hope, for one day your tears shall dry,
your sorrow be turned into joy,
your shortcomings overshadowed by success.
Have hope, for your dreams will come true.
Have hope!
Live hope!
Breathe hope!
Be hope!'

Princess, you should notice that in the second paragraph I do not repeat 'shall' and 'will' within the same sentence structure; that would be unnecessary repetition.

Thanks

[Jebat Serawak]

Strong words usage in this poem. Massages are clearly delivered. Nice writing!

[Izzy-01]

i liked how in your poem the negative was always overshadowed by the positive aspects and hopeful aspects .....it jus emphasizes how hope will always prevail if we jus have a lil faith ....nicely done

[Poetic-pRiNcEsS]

thank u dearest poet

[ayosonolowo]

Thank you for the advise
nice written
please keep it up

[Poetic-pRiNcEsS]

the pleaure is all mine nd thnx for the review