Sweet Bliss

Short and to the point, this poem describes what a certain lady does to me....Enjoy

Enchanted beauty
You hypnotize me
From the time I look in your eyes
Alone I'm strong
but with you in my arms
I'm stronger like a lion with its Pride
Content...thats how I feel
as I protect you from the world's harm
as every touch and every kiss
turns this once cold heart warm
and your heart is filled with bliss
 

Author's Note

lol I'm open minded, any useful, positive suggestions for improving my work is fully welcomed, thanx, God bless

Reviews

[Steffi]

It was such a light and wonderful read.
The rhyme was nice as well as the flow
Good write

[Sam Freeland]

Knowing of love
is a source of our strength
we have evolved like lions
our future has length
All sexual forms of life
get stronger that way
they prove in handling problems
they can save the day......your open minded, positive manner commands respect.

[Anna]

wonderful!

[Rambling Prose]

This is a beautiful expression of a blissful heart. I love the warm ethereal feel, a fortunate lady indeed.

I'm sending a note along ~ nice job...

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

A lovely romantic write. Good job. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[Illegitimate Artist]

I've got one that makes me feel the same way ^__^
Like the way this piece flows. Proves something doesn't have to be super long to be good. Nice work!