Nightfall

When the night comes

and I go out in the dew

I look up in the sky

And end up thinking of you.

The twinkling of the stars

Somehow remind me of your eyes,

That sparkles when you smile,

And their brightness remind me,

Of how you make my life.

 

When the night comes

And I wait for a day anew

I sleep and have dreams of you;

With me on the beach watching the sunset

Holding hands under the trees together

As the winds blow through our hair

And the waves crashes in a salty lather

Into your eyes I stare

 

When the night comes

I can't help thinking about you

The feelings inside of me

Are real and true

And unlike the night

they don't disappear and fade,

Into the break of day.......

Author's Note

this one I did a while back, forgive any grammar problems lol thanx

Reviews

[emmajoy]

No matter grammar... your beautiful words are what matters... they say so much

When the night comes
I can't help thinking about you
The feelings inside of me
Are real and true
And unlike the night
they don't disappear and fade,
Into the break of day.......

Deep, real emotion written in a very lovely manner.. long may it last.

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Tenderly felt and beautiful.

[Windy]

Really enjoyed this. Nice flow and great description of feeling. Good job. Putting favorites..
windy

[emz]

very beautiful... your writing is truly gorgeous, x

[BriAnna Wyble]

your writing is utterly beautiful.


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[Jessi]

WOW who ever it is that inspires you to write this way is very lucky I would die to hear those words spoken for me very BEAUTIFUL

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very nice flow and wonderful writing. thank you for sharing