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Behind Closed Doors......

Behind Closed Doors......

A Poem by Yellow Butterfly

Music courtesy of my good friend EDZY....




She's dressed head to toe ready to impress

Slender toned body in her slinky pink dress



She wastes no time as she gives him a look

Stirring emotions inside him was all it took



Blood increases adrenalin rushes within

Change in pallor crimson flush blushes skin



His eyes widen sexual tension pupil dilates

Shallow breaths his poised mouth salivates



She’s deliriously unaware caught up in his trance

He doesn’t do anything except watch her dance



She cannot deny he makes her feel this fabulous

His woody cologne makes her feel so amorous



Interactive are these soulful sounds he plays

Watching how her body moves and sways



A fervent wanton look upon her pretty face

Unable to speak as her heart picks up pace



Mutual attraction is where this lust ends

Behind closed doors their love transcends




© 2013 Yellow Butterfly

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Nice to read you again... and to find that inner passion is still smouldering and flowing into your words... I would love to share an evening with you behind closed doors...

Posted 2 Years Ago

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Wow this got my mind and blood going wild.

Posted 4 Years Ago

Wow I am blown away my gosh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You are a writer Butterfly:)

Posted 4 Years Ago

Butterfly, another great play on words. Perfect prose.

Posted 4 Years Ago

Hmmmmmm I do like it.

I liked "Change in pallor crimson flush blushes skin" - the most. A lot actually.

"A fervent wanton.." I feel like I've heard that before. But I get it.

I smell something arousing here!!

Posted 4 Years Ago

The image of this poem has sat in my RR list - inviting like the cherry at the bottom of the ice cream sundae (after all has melted). It tasted just as sweet and was well worth the wait YB - sublime!!

Posted 4 Years Ago

This was such a sensual, stirring, rhythmic dance of words that simply sets the mind and heart in flame. You do know how to beguile us, you beautiful butterfly. xo

Posted 4 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well wow, this was amazing! You blew me away with this write, YB!

Posted 4 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was very spellbinding... the format really added to the heat in this one. I must admit, the pic above it had me mesmerized for a few minutes as well. lol Such a fan of you beautiful women, my one weakness.

Posted 4 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Some lovely word choice and placement with this one. Very sexy.

Posted 4 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on September 20, 2013
Last Updated on September 20, 2013

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