Snow Angels......

Snow Angels......

A Poem by Yellow Butterfly
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Christmas Haiku

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Sprinkling of snow flakes

Softly falling from the sky

Divine messengers


© 2013 Yellow Butterfly



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A perfect marriage of words and video. I love it.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Beautiful words, feelings and sweet, sweet graphic. Takes both heart and awareness to write like this.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Beautiful, and beautiful song as well, you never cease to impact us, either small or big. Usually in a BIG way. Thanks, peaceful.

Posted 2 Years Ago


I don't really like haikus half the time, but this one works well. Its nice to think of them as more than angelsh** like my brothers used to tell me when I was a kid -_-

Posted 2 Years Ago


Yellow Butterfly

2 Years Ago

Hahaha.... my sisters and brothers had the same kind of sentiment towards me then and even now..
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Very simple, but gorgeous haiku! Loved this.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Such soft gentle words.
Beautiful poem Yellow Butterfly.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Lovely. Haiku has always eluded me.

Posted 2 Years Ago


This command of scripture to think about lovely things, and haiku discipline of the mind, I wish all those snowflakes were falling here now, there are many snowflakes not just one, sometimes take long time as they become blocks of ice, going from one microscopic image to incredible volume of vein-like life pattern

Posted 2 Years Ago


I must have been channelling you YB - I commented on a review there that snowflakes are here and gone (echoing a reviewers thoughts at the time) - like messengers - I hadnt even read this. I hope you don't think Im nicking your ideas my friend.
Now for the review - I was so glad to read a haiku - (I have been getting through 1200 reviews cause i went away for a year and didnt close the profile and the number of haikus in that lot is miniscule).
I miss the eloquent simplicity and lightness of the style. Thanks for re-pubbing this one.
Class

Posted 2 Years Ago


Beautiful haiku! And what an appropriate metaphor...snowflakes, in many ways, do seem angelic, especially when they land directly on your nose. I like to think that God (or whatever presence you may have faith in) is omnipresent, and snowflakes are a wonderful reminder of that.

Posted 3 Years Ago



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