Could this be....

Could this be....

A Poem by Yellow Butterfly




Could this be...
A chance meeting
a feeling

Releasing flutters deep inside

Uncanny similarities

in personalities

 

 

Could this be...

What they’re looking for

Are they ready to explore

as they get to know

each other more

 

 

Could this be...

As they take a chance

first impressions first glance
Impossible to tell
 where

this will lead...

 

 

Could this be...

the start of something

so amazingly breathtaking

a beautiful fairy tale

unfolds...

 

Could this be....

 

That theirs is a story to be told


© 2014 Yellow Butterfly



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Yellow Butterfly

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True love, so beautifully described, ALL can relate for they either have it, or so desire it, even if they won't admit it. Beautiful piece, made me fall in love with their love. Thank You, keep writing.

Posted 2 Years Ago


The thrill of untainted love is a very exciting, irresistible allure !

A sensual, rhythmic poetic write, delightful indeed !

Posted 3 Years Ago


Your romantic poetry is as bold and exciting as new found love itself, I very much like the train of thoughts I was taken along with this, keep writing you are inspiring me

Posted 3 Years Ago


A nicely constructed poem recognising the intriguing possibilities of first encounters. You are such a romantic! :-)

Posted 3 Years Ago


This is a very sweet love story, and I enjoy how it's simply told in only a few words. I liked the small "butterfly" reference with "flutters deep inside," (even if that was unintentional).

I noticed one small typo in the second stanza - where it says "As the[y] get to know each other more," but other than that, I love it! Beautiful little story.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Yellow Butterfly

3 Years Ago

Thanks for stopping by Eric and reviewing... much appreciated..

YB
Could this be a story for the ages. A wonderful romance poem...:)............

Posted 3 Years Ago


Yellow Butterfly

3 Years Ago

It certainly could.... :)
Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Yep. You are welcome...:)...............
your choice of words and style seem very familiar, do you go under a different name? this is a wonderful poem. love it from context to form. excellent write!!!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Yellow Butterfly

3 Years Ago


Hi Mark.. thank you for stopping by and enjoying this piece...
All my own work and only.. read more
Mark Anthony Cotterman

3 Years Ago

so will, truly enjoyed this....and very happy to have stumbled upon you.
Yellow Butterfly

3 Years Ago

That's cool... and thank you... I look forward to reading and reviewing your work too ...

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