Togetherness

Togetherness

A Poem by Yellow Butterfly



Ensemble of hues

Greyness to blues

Crashing waves burst

Unquenchable thirst

 

Powerful forceful surges

Raging turbulent urges

Lingering wet kisses

Soft tender caresses

 

Ambrosia sweet divine

Shivers down spine

A paradisaical innocence

Captures the essence



© 2014 Yellow Butterfly



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Yellow Butterfly


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Some fine words and rhyming schemes here YB.....haven't been on here for a while, and good to see you are still writing. This is sensual and I love the match of words to picture.....
Favourite lines = ensemble of hues and ambrosia sweet divine......
BB

Posted 2 Years Ago


Lingering wet kisses would be so sensational... Where would you like them?

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ah another Hopeless romantic

you play with your words as I do
beautifully painted like a true romantic Poet!


Nicely done I loved this was stunning and I love
the ocean BTW and it made this very romantic also.



God bless. Benita

Posted 2 Years Ago


You have a romantic side to you that comes out in this. I envy your thoughts and vision here.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Again another great piece from you letting the reader really feel the emotions. And your adding the music to your poems adds to the impact. Nice job, again.

Posted 2 Years Ago


profound words and beautiful imagination are painting very romantic sense


Posted 3 Years Ago


Very intense Butterfly. There was almost a release by the end. Your work usually has a compact urgency about it.

Posted 3 Years Ago


i dont think there is ever enough words to describe true connections but this is a wonderful ode and start

Posted 3 Years Ago


Soft and sensual and oh so romantic! A beautiful love poem!

:) Julie

Posted 3 Years Ago


~Intoxicating!
~~ All verses are romantically expressed ~~

Posted 3 Years Ago



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