Like a Fine Glass of Red Wine.....

Like a Fine Glass of Red Wine.....

A Poem by Yellow Butterfly



Lush smooth silky to touch

perfectly elegant so divine
Softly pour not too much

like a fine velvety Red Wine 

To name a wine after me

a fine wine I already know

This wine really has to be

the one they call Merlot

 

Wine me dine me you will see

drench me in Tuscany Sun

Just how fruity I can be

together we'll have lots of fun!

 

 


© 2015 Yellow Butterfly



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Yellow Butterfly
KR

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Wow!
Very well written and it touched me,
Can I just say though, you have potential!
My favorite part was, "To name a wine after me
a fine wine I already know
This wine really has to be
the one they call Merlot"
Please continue to write and read!
Can you by chance look at my story The Blonde Girl, It would really mean a lot to me.
Your new fan,

C. Lee Battaglia


Posted 2 Years Ago


I love Tuscany and it's Sun. All Italy too and this marvelous poem. Glad you are back....:).....

Posted 2 Years Ago


shiraz man meself But you spin a fine wine of a tale YELLOW

Posted 2 Years Ago


I love Merlot too... smooth and fruity... I want to do it... Shall we?

Posted 2 Years Ago


Hey YB - long time no see. A Merlot eh? You definitely served a fruity bouquet here with just the right amount of whimsy to keep it light, yet still enough body to make the reader smile at the thoughts of those sensual sunny days, and wanting another glass.
So subtly done - nice writing.
good to see you again.
:)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Yellow Butterfly

2 Years Ago

Hey Anto... Lovely to have you stop by and thanks for the great review ... it's nice to be back... :.. read more

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