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Compartment 114
Compartment 114
For You, Anita

For You, Anita

A Poem by Poetic Solace
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Memory of a person, whom i miss dearly

"

"Angel of Mercy, how did you find me?"


Those were the words that fell from your lips that day

Your bloodstained ones

Crimson splashed with purple against your pale skin

The blood splattered against the wall

Tells of the deed you have committed


The blood still is on my hands

I see you, I miss you

I remember those old days

When we used to play on the swings

And bike until our legs gave way

Those, were the good days


Now it's all so different

You died, disappeared from my life

Dead and gone


You used to always make hints at what you were going to do

Was it that I didn't listen?

Or was it just that I didn't want to believe it

Until the day you died


The rain never stopped that day

From the moment I woke up

I felt empty

Saturday was your funeral


Did you know that I sang for you?

Did you know, that half way through the song, I cried?

It's not better when you leave everything behind, dear

It makes it more painful for the people to live


That's what I'm doing now,

Living a life, with the memory of you

Pulling me down slowly

Tugging me into the abyss

Until, one day

I disappear.

© 2009 Poetic Solace


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that was beautiful. i enjoyed it very much. the emotion of this poem filled my soul. good write!

Posted 14 Years Ago


i can totally relate with you however mines aint names anita :) I liked it alot and can relate so thats a kewl thing especially the emotion that went into the poem i like it all so i can't pick one out cant wait to read one of your other poems bring it on :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hey, this is a lot better than some of the other poetry I've read lately. I especially like this:

Did you know that I sang for you?

Did you know, that half way through the song, I cried?

I look forward to seeing more, welcome to the site!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Poetic Solace
Poetic Solace

Stalker, MN



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"Music = Poetry" I live in this one place called Minnesota... You've probably heard of it. You know, the one with the twin cities and stuff.. Yeahh... I realized that music is my escape from.. more..

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