Summer's Child

Summer's Child

A Poem by SleepiePenguin

Summer's Child
The morning air seems too thick for one to enjoy,
It sticks and clings to weathered sweaters
And refuses to let go like a small child.

The sun beats down heavily upon squinched eyelids,
And casts their shadows to follow shortly after.

And, yet, here we are daring to step out into the sun,
Knowing well aware that it will act like a small child,
And cause our eyes to stay only half open.

~KB (AKA PoetryPenguin)

© 2017 SleepiePenguin


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I really love the mood and the feel of this poem. Oh, I miss the "old" summer days. Nice work.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SleepiePenguin

6 Years Ago

Thank you for reviewing this poem, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
i love this one!
feels like summer, has a calming tone.
Feels like a moment on summer day. Well done!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SleepiePenguin

6 Years Ago

Thank you for reviewing and giving me your opinion!

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Added on June 20, 2017
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