Hurt

Hurt

A Poem by PoetryPenguin

Hurt--
It doesn't disappear with the weather's despair,
nor does it get swept and taken by the cold winds.

The rain doesn't drench it, 
and have it dissolve like wet paper--
and the sun surely won't melt it with it's rays.

You can keep it underground,
but if you can't bury a past 
then this surely is no different.

Everything returns to the surface,
whether it is weathered bones
or the cries of an empty heart.

~KB

© 2017 PoetryPenguin



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Yes. I do have thoughts thank you...

Oh you want me to share them ;))
joking...
Well I liked the brevity - that is a skill in itself and I liked the various left of field analogies - very creatively done indeed.

Posted 3 Months Ago


PoetryPenguin

3 Months Ago

Haha, thanks for liking and giving your thoughts. :)
Wow. I have never read something like this. I loved the last stanza.

Posted 3 Months Ago


PoetryPenguin

3 Months Ago

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it :D
Najam Us Saher

3 Months Ago

You're welcome.☺
Really like this. Must admit the first stanza had me hooked. Very good.

Posted 3 Months Ago


PoetryPenguin

3 Months Ago

I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading!
i like it. I agree that while a lot of times we tend to talk about how the rain or sunshine cures things- they don't. good job!

Posted 3 Months Ago


PoetryPenguin

3 Months Ago

Thank you :)

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Added on June 27, 2017
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Tags: hurt, weather, despair, disappear, rain, sun, wind, underground, bury, empty, heart, surface

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