Dance With Air

Dance With Air

A Poem by PoppySilver

Pluck
pluck

Two feathers
with which she shall dance
plucked from the skin
of her shapeshifted being

Who will sing to her dance
you with pain in your heart
or you with smiles upon your gaze?

Two feathers
plucked from her shapeshifted being
with which she shall dance...
for you all

(c)2014 PoppySilver




© 2014 PoppySilver



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Amazing artwork and powerful words.
"Who will sing to her dance
you with pain in your heart
or you with smiles upon your gaze?"
I like the question above. I wanted to know more. The poem left me with things to ponder. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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B.J
Brilliant flow and beautiful imagery, and a wonderful read.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Thank you all so much for your wonderful, wonderful comments, I appreciate them all...am leaving an overall thank you as I am struggling with tiredness of late, but you are ALL appreciated and loved xx

Posted 4 Years Ago


This is seriously interesting. I dance around pondering images and wondering who will sing to her dance. Oh my gosh I just just love that! Lol...brillant!

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Great poem and a cool painting. The total package.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Wow this speaks to me... between the lines. I admire the passion with which you write.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Mysterious to the nth degree, Poppy! Intriguing and dramatic images dance on the page. Lydi**

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Sam
Very beautiful. I love the imagery, and the idea of the decision every being makes between which of their faces they choose to show.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Wow, I really loved this, dramatic images dance from your words...

Posted 4 Years Ago


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i really like this one poppy As i said the picture does justice to the work

Posted 4 Years Ago


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I like it :) I like the musical quality to it, and the imagery.
Well done!

K.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Welcome to my page. I write mainly poetry but I also write stream of thought prose. I also create spoken word poetry and have a couple of novels on the go (dust covered albeit;) Currently working on m.. more..

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