Four Candles Stand Alight

Four Candles Stand Alight

A Poem by Ruth

Inspired by a poem from Avinash...wrenched my heart...


Four voices
four futures

Children are children
poor or rich
who will be their light
now they sleep

Four tones
threads of the world
unwoven ribbons
lost in the breeze

Four candles stand alight
to remember their dreams
I pray they can be the flame
that will help guide them home

(c)2014 PoppySilver

© 2014 Ruth

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So tragic when young lives are cut short...well written...

Posted 4 Years Ago

Aw incredibly sad, but beautifully written. A wonderful tribute for lives cut tragically short.

Posted 4 Years Ago

So sad, so vivid, so beautiful.

Posted 4 Years Ago

beautiful tribute...the dying away of candle flames perfectly represents the ephemeral state of human lives.

Posted 4 Years Ago

squeezing the parental love from my heart with this one

Posted 4 Years Ago

Only you could write this and make it read with a pulse, Poppy!

Outstanding work, my dear friend!

Posted 4 Years Ago

A touching tribute Poppy, I have read the piece Avinash wrote and this is so fitting...stunning my friend. xo

Posted 4 Years Ago

Heartfelt sadness in this one, Poppy.
" Four tones
threads of the world
unwoven ribbons
lost in the breeze"

So very touching! Lydi**

Posted 4 Years Ago

You have touched my heart with your beautiful words.
:) Julie

Posted 4 Years Ago

Beautiful poetry Poppy, simply beautiful!!!

Posted 4 Years Ago

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Added on August 15, 2014
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