A Poem by Poppy Ruth Silver

I wanted to wait for candlelight
a soft haze to fall over your skin
let my eyes adore
before I touched you
but that isn't possible
I need to absorb you now
press yourself against me
weave a five fold kiss
linger at the points of a pentagram
gently placed upon my skin
be the summer to my winter
I promise I will let you climb inside
this hollow ache
that for so long
has been mine

(c)2014 PoppySilver

© 2014 Poppy Ruth Silver

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The intentions of this writing are clearly rooted on intimacy. Of a moment to let down and put aside cold thinking and imbue yourself with the heat that lays as the product of desires, of wanting , of unity of bodies and there is even a little dominance thrown in. Why not? As I promise you I will let you comes in to let us know who is who here.

You go and get what you want then Poppy


Posted 3 Years Ago

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Poppy Ruth Silver

3 Years Ago

Think I may just do that Rene ;) lol Thanks love xo


I need to absorb you now
press yourself against me
weave a five fold kiss

Aah, these words have life in them

Posted 1 Year Ago

Beautiful interpretation into the depths of a simple gesture!

Posted 3 Years Ago

Sometimes you just gotta dive right in and forget the niceties. A really sexy, wonderful write.

Posted 3 Years Ago

I love this with this tune!
Amazing insight and connection with one special someone.
Nice work@!

Posted 3 Years Ago

A true and loving poetic embrace that all can feel touched and be warmed...
Always moved by your words dear lady.

Posted 3 Years Ago

I loved the slowness of this piece, the passions, the yearning , AWESOME WRITE!

Posted 3 Years Ago

Full of passion and yearning!

Posted 3 Years Ago

its a very touching read but I didn't understood the line 'linger at the points of a pentagram'

Posted 3 Years Ago

╰☆╮I really love your style of poetry. This is very romantic. (:╰☆╮

Posted 3 Years Ago

this was a pleasant read poppy full f love and passion yet soft

Posted 3 Years Ago

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Added on August 27, 2014
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Poppy Ruth Silver
Poppy Ruth Silver

United Kingdom

Merry Meet all, welcome to my page. I write mainly poetry but I also write stream of thought prose. I also create spoken word poetry and have a couple of novels on the go (dust covered albeit;) My .. more..


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