Gently in Your Gaze

Gently in Your Gaze

A Poem by Ruth

As I open my eyes
take me gently
be my sunrise

Soften the ache
warm my skin
breathe me in

Take me gently
I love you
a beautiful day begins


(c)2014 PoppySilver



© 2014 Ruth



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Its wonderful...a really heart warming piece :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


amazing,
sometimes the simplest words make the deepest impact (^^)

Posted 2 Years Ago


lovely and lyrical writing from you dear Poppy!

Posted 2 Years Ago


...the longing of true love...short and simply sweet...well written Poppy Silver...

Posted 3 Years Ago


I really love the way it was written!
:)
Great job!
can you check out some of my poems,please

Posted 3 Years Ago



Take me gently
I love you
a beautiful day begins

Favorite one.

Posted 3 Years Ago


A warm embrace of words, beautiful Poppy, smiling in your poetry's gaze. xo

Posted 3 Years Ago


Everyone should wake up this warm and happy everyday. Good, simple, clean write that completes itself.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Very beautiful and loving all in one, captures love perfectly.Soften the ache,
warm my skin,
breathe me in...beautiful

Posted 3 Years Ago


In a few lines you capture the heart and mind of the reader. SOULFUL.

Posted 3 Years Ago



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