Saturation

Saturation

A Poem by Vicki Ruth

Through love and sacrifice
unseen, he would watch her rise
melodiously

He would see her shine
in the nightfall of his heart

Honour and reverence
own love, together or apart


©2015 PoppySilver

© 2015 Vicki Ruth



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Vicki Ruth

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When you gift something to someone and see it placed at the most sacred pedestal. You feel contentment and happiness beyond any parallel. May be like the river reaches its destination, light reaching the darkest corner, a seed coming to life or every word finding its meaning.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vicki Ruth

3 Years Ago

Indeed my love...your thoughts and heartfelt words are a shimmer ♥



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Nice one....love it ........

Posted 9 Months Ago


So nice. It sums up a scene so realistically.

Posted 1 Year Ago


i had been writing intensely for quite a while when existing trouble surfaced so i joined real time writers groups and wrote more. eventually something was chasing me and caught up. i faultered more than ever before and nearly crumbled. i have been unable to write the way i should for 3+ months if at all. i am trying to get back into it so i've been returning to past places where i found inspiration and interest. this place is one, and your poem does the trick. "she" to me may be poetry itself. so i feel these words when i know she is a poem too. thank you for making me feel this way.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Poppy this is a beautiful poem. I have missed reading you.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Beautiful and good words dear Poet.
"Honour and reverence
own love, together or apart"
Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


A wonderful description of love...well written PoppySilver.

Posted 3 Years Ago


beautifully romantic poem Poppy, a lovely write :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Very sweet words...the first stanza reminds me of this heart touching Youtube video title "Blind Devotion".

Posted 3 Years Ago


a love that some would call 'old fashioned' but the kind of love that puts lust out of business. Classy and stylish piece with an "ahh' right through it Poppy. Well penned my friend. :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vicki Ruth

3 Years Ago

ANTO, thank you dear heart :)
ANTO

3 Years Ago

your always welcome Poppy my friend. :)
I really like the flow of this one Poppy. You are really growing as a writer. Valentine

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vicki Ruth

3 Years Ago

Thank you dear Valentine :)

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Vicki Ruth
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Welcome to my page. I write mainly poetry but I also write stream of thought prose. Nature is my faith and temple. I hope you enjoy your pause in my world of words. Thank you for reading and remember... more..

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