Which M

Which M

A Poem by PoppySilver

Muted

mutation

or mutiny

which is it

embedded deeply?


The birds seem happy

for an extra half an hour

of daylight today


Small mercies cast out

the ever cloaked grey

with their carefree chirps


There is something innocent

about their clever chorus

soft as snow on pain


Sly January

with your false hopes 

of a soft Spring

won't you divulge 

when my world

became so morbidly silent

that it white washed all sound

except the song of birds


Muted

mutation

or mutiny

which is it

embedded deeply

in winter's disdain?



©2016 PoppySilver

http://poppysilver.weebly.com/



© 2016 PoppySilver



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Mood reflection on the season of coldness.
The month of dreary skies and snowflakes floating in icy air.
Birds find a ray of hope.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Very colorful words Poppy Silver.

Posted 2 Years Ago


"soft as snow on pain"

gorgeous figurative language here

Posted 2 Years Ago


Very nice poem!
Great meaning!
Well done!!

Posted 2 Years Ago


I enjoyed this poem keep up the great work and thank you for sharing

Posted 2 Years Ago


I enjoyed this very much, truly shows the feelings you go through at a time like this, whilst also showing that it could be more than just the season you're talking about here. An underlying current of suffering. Well done!

Posted 2 Years Ago


ooh, melancholy, and dark moody poetry. soft as snow on pain. Stellar line, Poppy

Posted 2 Years Ago


an understatement of sombreness, all the more powerful for it.

Posted 2 Years Ago


The opening and finishing stanza's are very potent indeed which added a mystery somewhat unknown maybe waiting for Winter's final curtain to fall while the bird's stir in their slumber! A lovely write!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Winter will be over soon. Light will tear the clouds and embrace every one longing for it. The beauty of your poems darling is not just withing words but the spaces in between them.

Posted 2 Years Ago



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Welcome to my page. I write mainly poetry but I also write stream of thought prose. I also create spoken word poetry and have a couple of novels on the go (dust covered albeit;) Currently working on m.. more..

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