She Dreams Of the Sea With Strawberries and Cream

She Dreams Of the Sea With Strawberries and Cream

A Poem by Poppy Ruth Silver
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For my Nan...a visit that humbled me...

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I always wanted to see a storm at sea
she said with a smile and somehow I saw
a woman I have always loved and admired
a female figure that with her loss of memory
has become child-like in her innocence again
if I live, we can go to the sea next year
she laughed as I prepared her strawberries
I agreed for time is short, I sadly thought
it seems so finite and the waves pause for no-one
a trip to the sea feels like a life time away
though I didn't say such and let her dream
as she gently swayed and savoured
each strawberry dipped in cream





©2016 PoppySilver

© 2016 Poppy Ruth Silver



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This is one of the best of yours that I've read so far! I love this little vignette of sweet caring & compassionate understanding. This is the poster child for "SHOW, don't TELL" . . . in that you are teaching your reader about kindness without ever coming across as preachy. Plus, it's just strong visual writing that sounds completely original & without anything even slightly cliché (amongst a zillion poems written about the sea). Excellent consonance/rhyme with "dreams" and "cream" . . . excellent alliteration in the second line, which is seemingly made up of simple words, but rolls off the tongue so artfully.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poppy Ruth Silver

1 Year Ago

barletygirl, thank you very much love, I really appreciate that, much love to you :)



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Lovely piece. Keep Writing

Posted 6 Months Ago


This poem reminded me of my grandma, towards her end, she too became childlike, and this is a sweet tribute to the dreamer of seas.

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poppy Ruth Silver

8 Months Ago

Thank you very much Rebecca :)
I'm glad I rummaged through your catalog, it was well worth it to read this jewel. Truly heartfelt poetry. Kudos!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poppy Ruth Silver

8 Months Ago

Thank you very much Paloma :)
Just beautiful. Ruth, you're a brilliant writer

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Poppy Ruth Silver

1 Year Ago

Baby, that means a lot, thank you :)
"a female figure that with her loss of memory
has become child-like in her innocence again"

sad lines - they express a truth that comes from observation, not pretentious thinking

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poppy Ruth Silver

1 Year Ago

Thank you Cascara, very much :)
To take care of those in strife is the best reward a soul can harbor, well done, good read.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poppy Ruth Silver

1 Year Ago

Thomas, thanks lovely :)
This reminded me of what it like what it feels like for a loved one with Alzheimer's or dementia. Loved it.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Poppy Ruth Silver

1 Year Ago

Dementia, yes...thank you hon :)
A lovely rhythm, and relationship between the writer and one one who wants to see the sea. It is compassionate not to tell her that's not possible, to let her dream, and feed her strawberries. Gentle, loving, visual, kindness is here, even if reality sits under the surface unspoken. Let her dream. Lovely, thank you.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poppy Ruth Silver

1 Year Ago

Thank you Marianne, I shall let her dream :)
Wow. I loved the simplicity of this poem. It conveyed a "distant" impact while still maintaining the emotional impact that a poem should have. I basically mean that I felt the emotion in a passive sort of way, as if there is some sort of underlying emotion in this. I hope that made sense. I enjoyed reading this.

-William Liston

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Poppy Ruth Silver

1 Year Ago

It makes sense and I appreciate your thoughts very much, thank you William :)
Love the first line about the storm!
Keep on writing!!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poppy Ruth Silver

1 Year Ago

Thanks Emily...

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Poppy Ruth Silver
Poppy Ruth Silver

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Merry Meet all, welcome to my page. I write mainly poetry but I also write stream of thought prose. I also create spoken word poetry and have a couple of novels on the go (dust covered albeit;) My .. more..

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