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A Poem by Vicki Kent

For all the wise witch in me
as much as I am Shiva's daughter
I still voice the soulful Ave Maria
somehow it is embedded in my soul
perhaps from a Catholic life
lived out so very long ago
for all the wandering gypsy in me
as much as nature is my eternal home
I still voice the soulful Ave Maria
somehow it is rooted in my heart
perhaps to cast out despair
for all the Goddess in me
as much as I am part of the Gods
I still voice the soulful Ave Maria
suppliant in such a prayer





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© 2016 Vicki Kent



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This is very creative & original. I like the progression from "witch" to "gypsy" to "Goddess." I also love this song, which I sang in choir many times, many years ago, but the song really stays with a person, just like the way you've stated it in your message. I'm always admiring writers who juxtapose dark & light aspects of life, which you've done nicely here.

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Vicki Kent

2 Years Ago

barleygirl, thank you, I wonder how many songs stay with us through life at times, it is an ongoing .. read more



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Very deep writing, I like the the'' witch'' to ''gypsy''to''Goddess.'' I loved it all. Thank you for sharing your work. I do hope you can drop by my page and read some of mine. I would really like it.

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Interesting subject, well done

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vicki Kent

1 Year Ago

Thank you :)
This thought provoking work. I enjoyed the layers of depth and the experience of oneness in the words. It gave me a feeling of many aspects of life being not the same but not different.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Vicki Kent

1 Year Ago

I really appreciate your thoughts hon, thank you :)
Funny how things we heard when young stick with us even though we have grown beyond them. Valentine

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Vicki Kent

1 Year Ago

Very true Kathie, thank you :)
Shiva's daughter huh? :P
Actually my surname is a synonym of Shiva..
Cheers from India

Posted 2 Years Ago


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Vicki Kent

2 Years Ago

Awesome, thank you Ashwin :)
Wonderful write!
Keep it up!!

Posted 2 Years Ago


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Vicki Kent

2 Years Ago

Thank you Emily...
Different, original, creative.......enjoyed your poetry.

Posted 2 Years Ago


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Vicki Kent

2 Years Ago

Thank you Nwang :)
the set is a collection of well thought out prose with a hint of magic, well done, good read.

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Vicki Kent

2 Years Ago

Thomas, many thanks hon :)
I love the tone of the poem. Despite all, there is deep influence of Catholicism and I think It should influece your writings. Well written.

Posted 2 Years Ago


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Vicki Kent

2 Years Ago

I believe I was a Catholic Nun in a past life :) Thank you for sharing your thoughts hon :)

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