Simple Yet Brilliant

Simple Yet Brilliant

A Poem by Poppy Ruth Silver
"

Some joys are the most simple :)

"


Simple yet brilliant,
like the last pretzel, covered
in the most sea salt.


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© 2017 Poppy Ruth Silver



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i don't know Poppy! that end of the bag pretzel has a lot of salt ;) ...
but those "last ones" are the best!
E.
ps .. such a peaceful meditative music vid choice .. listening enticed my first "cleansing breath of the morning ... ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh! not salty at all ;)

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Poppy Ruth Silver

3 Weeks Ago

I thought a bit of Deuter added the honey to the salt ;) Thanks hon :)
Einstein Noodle

3 Weeks Ago

:) ................



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sometimes the last is the most.. why must we always be first??? they say, good guys finish last as though that is a bad thing, there's something wrong with that view...Poppy you give us this last senyru and the saltiness is in the most thought provoking, like the music.. "Joy of Silence"... you do know how to be brilliant Poppy, truly!!

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mou
absolutely.. simplicity is the ultimate sophistication.. and yes just like pretzel.. excessive emotions even ruin the heart too.. short but quite capturing write ..just lovely Poppy :)

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Poppy Ruth Silver

3 Weeks Ago

I really appreciate your thoughts mou :) Many thanks :)
i don't know Poppy! that end of the bag pretzel has a lot of salt ;) ...
but those "last ones" are the best!
E.
ps .. such a peaceful meditative music vid choice .. listening enticed my first "cleansing breath of the morning ... ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh! not salty at all ;)

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poppy Ruth Silver

3 Weeks Ago

I thought a bit of Deuter added the honey to the salt ;) Thanks hon :)
Einstein Noodle

3 Weeks Ago

:) ................
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MCS
So few words but to the point :)

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Poppy Ruth Silver

3 Weeks Ago

MCS, thank you :)
That's my girl, get my mind on the culinary delights of life! I love it!! x

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Poppy Ruth Silver

3 Weeks Ago

lol Thanks lovely x
I agree. I love pretzel, covered
in the most sea salt. The simple things make us content. Thank you Poppy for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

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Poppy Ruth Silver

4 Months Ago

Thank you very much hon :)
Coyote Poetry

4 Months Ago

You are welcome dear Poppy.
Because they leave us with less words and more feelings.

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Poppy Ruth Silver

4 Months Ago

You got it...you genius :) ♥
the simplest things are the best! this write and that pretzel.

"Salt is good; but if the salt becomes unsalty, with what will you make it salty again? Have salt in yourselves, and be at peace with one another."

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Poppy Ruth Silver

4 Months Ago

I like that thought Pete, thank you :)
well you painted a vision ,so the haiku was right on

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Poppy Ruth Silver

4 Months Ago

Thank you wordman :)
now that is simple....yet tasty---simple can entice, sometimes more than all the frills. Pretzel logic.
j.

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Poppy Ruth Silver

4 Months Ago

Pretzel logic lol I like that...thanks Jacob :)

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Poppy Ruth Silver
Poppy Ruth Silver

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Merry Meet all, welcome to my page. I write mainly poetry but I also write stream of thought prose. I also create spoken word poetry and have a couple of novels on the go (dust covered albeit;) My .. more..

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