Who Holds The Controls

Who Holds The Controls

A Poem by Poppy Ruth Silver
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“I don't believe that consciousness is generated by the brain. I believe that the brain is more of a receiver of consciousness.” ― Graham Hancock

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I wonder at times if earth is a dome like prison
humanity seem to have lost the true thread
of what infinite consciousness really is
maybe this level of existence has been hacked
is nothing more than a computer game
true consciousness gave possibility in the beginning
for all things to create themselves as they deemed necessary
but with that notion or rather intuitive philosophy
comes the fact that not only good can choose to form itself
the bad has free will to create itself also in the natural balance
the showdown is imminent and aliens know so
among such fierce corruption, war and poverty
pressure is on to act accordingly with the heart
yet in the process of division and injustice
I have to ask what if there is a beyond past the beyond
are aliens simply part of this dome like prison
this computer game we all play a part in
are they part of the all that simply is and was 
promising past, turbulent today and tense tomorrow
freedom of creation will always be like free speech
the negative has a right to form as well as the positive
the showdown is imminent and disclosure on the horizon
yet I wonder what difference it will make to the forever
what truly exists beyond the ultimate beyond
 
 
©2017 PoppySilver

© 2017 Poppy Ruth Silver



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I feel the same way sometimes as the below lines.
"I have to ask what if there is a beyond past the beyond
are aliens simply part of this dome like prison
this computer game we all play a part in"
Maybe we are just chess pieces for something unknown? Thank you dear Poppy for sharing your amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Months Ago


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Poppy Ruth Silver

2 Months Ago

I liken it to chess pieces at times too hon...sobering thought ey? Thank you :)
Coyote Poetry

2 Months Ago

You are welcome dear Poppy.



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Life at its best. thanks for sharing your wonderful talent.

Posted 2 Months Ago


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Poppy Ruth Silver

2 Months Ago

And thank you for sharing your wonderful thoughts Roxane :)
Nice thoughts which you have expressed in simple language using appropriate words. I like it. Thanks for sharing.

Best
Szhzia

Posted 3 Months Ago


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Poppy Ruth Silver

2 Months Ago

Many thanks hon :)
SZHZIA

1 Month Ago

You are welcome.
I love the way your message weaves together such disparate ideas -- consciousness, digital hacking, & the craziness of our current times! Very ambitious, but you did a great job! It's refreshing to read something with more depth & gravity, when it comes to commenting on the current trends. I agree with the opening Hancock quote, which ties in with your message perfectly.

Posted 4 Months Ago


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Poppy Ruth Silver

2 Months Ago

Beautiful but mind boggling place this realm at times lol Thanks love xx
Interesting set of thoughts. Sci fi ideas with a psychcological twist. Humanity has lost the thread. So I believe and technology is not the only answer. But then neither is present spirituality.
Rumi said Have you ever seen a fish disatisfied with the ocean?

Posted 4 Months Ago


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Poppy Ruth Silver

2 Months Ago

Ah, nice...yes...good ole Rumi, thanks Ken :)
a thought provoker, inspired by an interesting idea, this is lyric and neuro-biological at the same time, fine write..

Posted 4 Months Ago


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Poppy Ruth Silver

2 Months Ago

Many thanks Leslie :)
So amazing! It's sad how true just the first line is.

Posted 4 Months Ago


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Poppy Ruth Silver

2 Months Ago

Thank you bella :)
I believe the Creator has given the basic answers to all basic questions, that what is required of us is 'given' and we are not to wander aimlessly but to discover...........

Posted 4 Months Ago


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Poppy Ruth Silver

2 Months Ago

Interesting idea WILDERNESS, many thanks :)
WILDERNESS

1 Month Ago

most welcome dear friend.
Mind=blown... Poppy Silver... Wow... TRUTH... Conveyed in a wonderfully relatable, and to be blunt, smart way... The way you middle and end rhyme... Whew, this was a clever write, for darn sure... You got me wondering today, almost like I just binge-watched the Matrix series.... I hope aliens are not at the helm... Brilliantly penned...

Posted 4 Months Ago


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Poppy Ruth Silver

2 Months Ago

Binge watching the Matrix, now that got me thinking lol Thank you hon :)
These questions are hard to answer in one life time but they are poignant questions in front of humanity.
Words of a wise soul.

Posted 4 Months Ago


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Poppy Ruth Silver

2 Months Ago

And a visceral thought from another wise soul ;) ♥
"the bad has free will to create itself also in the natural balance" - nice, gentle optimism

Posted 4 Months Ago


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Poppy Ruth Silver

2 Months Ago

Thank you hon :)

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Merry Meet all, welcome to my page. I write mainly poetry but I also write stream of thought prose. I also create spoken word poetry and have a couple of novels on the go (dust covered albeit;) My .. more..

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