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Ripples

A Poem by PoppySilver
"

The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched. They must be felt with the heart ― Helen Keller

"


Humbleness
an inhalation that pains
because your soul aches
yet music has the gift
of dripping intricately 
through every cold dream
for what is death but life
in death we see our life
and it ripples on
sometimes poetry
is the crumbs 
we leave behind
so others find light




©2017 PoppySilver

© 2017 PoppySilver



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Thank you for sharing your wonderful thought and ideas.

Posted 1 Week Ago


That would be one thing I wish I could leave behind...beauty from my words and stories...well written Poppy...

Posted 7 Months Ago


Hello dear friend. Your words wonderful and true. Thank you Poppy for sharing your words and thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 7 Months Ago


It was a joy to see you call upon the and make us all aware of the bond that connects you with us all. Thought provoking work.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Tales of our pains can be solace to others.

Posted 7 Months Ago


I love this!
ripples and waves of life.
go with the flow of it or work against it,
music is peace and love with the poetry inside it.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Humbleness do hurt at times, very apt.
And tunes heals it all. Again correct.
Poetry do create ripples and readers sense it.

Nice write.

Posted 8 Months Ago


A poem to ponder over some beautiful thoughts of life and life before death. It is at that moment when we truly come to terms with life. Nicely written.

Posted 8 Months Ago


A beautiful little meditation on the things that make us human Poppy. Humbleness allows us insight, music takes us to another place. Death the final leveller and I particularly like the final lines about poetry. Great work.
Regards, Alan

Posted 8 Months Ago


a very interesting poem Poppy, in life and death we are but the Souls expressing Our Own Music through Poetic thoughts gliding through the Universe, let those who find the light of crumbs turn them into loaves of Poetry....much love my friend...

Posted 8 Months Ago



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Welcome to my page. I write mainly poetry but I also write stream of thought prose. I also create spoken word poetry and have a couple of novels on the go (dust covered albeit;) Currently working on m.. more..

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