Scars to the beauty!

Words

A Spoon of back stabbing is enough to burn a loving heart
the neatness, the purity, immensely carved proximity
this heart agreed for keeping the Pain inside
and still it is surviving under the cruelty of your already burnt mind

we are the slaves of our heart
it’s the polish, that shines
and “we agree to disagree” for some time
because, it gives mind to our mind!

Insane are these feelings
that our heart keeps like forever
burning the edges, without heeling the scar
and how would that be,
because it’s still keeping the ashes
tagged inside a jar!

It’s remarkable �" I must say
the nostalgia, the mark!
It cries, bleeds and cries then bleeds
now, it’s just helpful
in penning down my past!

Author's Note

:)

Reviews

[Raj Sahu]

"We are the slaves of our heart
it’s the polish, that shines
and “we agree to disagree” for some time
because, it gives mind to our mind!"

Nobody in this ephemeral world will like to bear agony. Such poignancy will lead him to death. But you make them realise that one can love these pains too. Amazingly composed!
Congratulations!

[costa siwale]

The description is intense, the wording on point in as far as personifying pain. I love how it all comes together. well written

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Thankyou dear Costa :)
I am glad you liked that

[Xochipilli]

Beautiful pain as most would say, and this is the beautiful pain in a description.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Thanks a lotttt Dear :)

[Ty]

Very bold yet resonates. Definitely enjoyed.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Thankyou soooo much TY :)

[An owl on the moon]

There is such a wondrous beauty even whispered through the pain. Reading your words one can sense a sacred story unfolding of what you've been through and who you are becoming, scars and all.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Yes!
Thankyou soo much dear Owl
Your words made my day :)

[An owl on the moon]

So glad because your words always bring joy to those here who read your thoughts. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

We must dear poet.
"It’s remarkable " I must say
the nostalgia, the mark!
It cries, bleeds and cries then bleeds
now, it’s just helpful
in penning down my past! "
The above lines is needed. To release words to paper. Can help us. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Yes Writing helps a lot
and it always remains with us
whether anyone stay or leave :)
Thankyou soo much Coyote!

[Coyote Poetry]

Me too and you are welcome my friend.

[Ardra]

because it’s still keeping the ashes
tagged inside a jar!

:) i so agree with this part... we let the ghost of past haunt us ... and weigh us down like the ashes inside the jar ...

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Exactly!
Thankyou soo much dear :)

Love
Pragati

[Pravir]

A Spoon of back stabbing is enough to burn a loving heart
This line was enough to grab my attention.... I read it twice and your every line had its own story.... Loved this... You have a great fluency of words which is very well used in this.... Keep up the good work... I loved it though it was heartbreaking and very depressing... A well expressed piece of poetry

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Yes! had seen a lot of disgust
may be thats why
I am laden with guilt and sanctity at the same time!
Thankyou soo much Pravir
Your words meant a lot to me!

Keep reading dear Friend!