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Phone

Phone

A Poem by Pragati Chaudhary
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As I switched off my Phone
I realised that sometimes
the real world is more inclined to reality
then an area far away
the people, the nostalgia, the sickness, the hatred
I released everything with my phone Switched off!






© 2017 Pragati Chaudhary


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Pragati Chaudhary
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It is so easy to get lost in virtual reality and believe that everything is okay, but when you take a step back and look at reality it hits you like a brick wall. I really like this poem Pragati. :D

Posted 6 Years Ago


Pragati Chaudhary

6 Years Ago

Thankyou dear Xochipili
Indeed how easy we all live a false account on-line be it by text, email or social media. My phone was being repaired recently and took two weeks. The relief of not having to be instantly available etc was liberating. Nice discussion piece.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Pragati Chaudhary

6 Years Ago

Yea we are soo much involved in that lill box that we forget about the outside beautiful world!
read more
you have the power!!!! ;)
E.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Pragati Chaudhary

6 Years Ago

Ohhhh! Well that Must be sad on your Pocket then :D
Einstein Noodle

6 Years Ago

we had a lot of fun in those days ...;)
Pragati Chaudhary

6 Years Ago

Just Lovely Einstein :)
The virtual world has us so immersed in it that literally none can live a day without their phone! So realistic.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Pragati Chaudhary

6 Years Ago

Exactly!
It's like another heart to people!
Zoya

6 Years Ago

Yup. It is.
Please, switch it off often! This phone is our parallel lives and we need to wake back to earth.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Mirror

6 Years Ago

Just found out. Well, in this digital world of apps?! WC beats it. Lets not rejoice yet. there are g.. read more
Pragati Chaudhary

6 Years Ago

Ya thats what I thought
There had to be an app!
Aneway Lets wait :)
Cheers!!!!!
Mirror

6 Years Ago

Cheers!! Friend.
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Exactly why i don't have a phone!

The line between fiction and reality becomes too obviously blurred and the phone becomes a symbol of instant gratification of the technological kind eventually becoming an addiction.

Now, if only i can get off the Tablet!

Nice write.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Pragati Chaudhary

6 Years Ago

lol! Cheers!
Mirror

6 Years Ago

Prag, you see, even while reviewing, they are distracted by phone types! :)))) lol, phone, oh phone.
Pragati Chaudhary

6 Years Ago

LolYeah yeah
Exactly
This phone has become a part of our heartless heart soo much :D
Well...... I hate you.
i hate you.
I really hate you for keeping the poem so short. It was so fantastic that i wanted the lines to go on and on. Girl you dont know your writings have a melody of their own that sicks the mind with the dark content on the context you write about and yet soothes the heart to the core for better understanding of the truth of life. Please write longer poems next time. I emphasize on the please.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Pragati Chaudhary

6 Years Ago

Ohhhhh! Surely Shubham
BTW Thankyou for hating me so much :D

:)Pragati
Shouldnt it be phone switched "off" at the end as well? Just a question on continuity. I enjoyed the piece since you spoke of a very relevant topic and I completely support what you did. It is better to just spend more time here in WC reading peoples posts :) 88

Posted 6 Years Ago


Pragati Chaudhary

6 Years Ago

Well yes! I could use Switched off too
but, I thought out would be apt because of the idea of.. read more
Truly well written poem, you have come up with....and so short and worth it is.
I really enjoyed it

Posted 6 Years Ago


Pragati Chaudhary

6 Years Ago

Thankyou soo much Dear Priyanshi :)
Priyanshi

6 Years Ago

My pleasure, friend.
Ha! That's one of my fav. poetry, i would say.

Sometimes, it's really intriguing to imagine, like, how just a state of mind can change our life in no time. And phone is one of the biggest nostalgia to us youth now-a-days... cos neither we can keep it so "Switched off" for long nor can compromise damn heart with "time" ev'n without stupid internet. How mesmerizing our life's become... with phone. An eye-catching, and of course, a very trendy poetry you've come up with. Looking forward to reading your stuffs.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Pragati Chaudhary

6 Years Ago

Hahahahah Yeah
we get soo busy with our phone that sometimes, we dont even realise what we ar.. read more

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Bhilai, Chhattisgarh, India



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