Father

Major Missing

Flying above the Winds of wisdom

galloping over the instances of the past
there is a feeling so hasty and true inside my heart
so very deep and still new

When my heart sits silently on the window pane looking towards the sky;
It discovers the very star every day
It says that it shines in its own way
Different from the other stars
and why not
The Star was very brave and strong!

From dawn to dusk it glows, pretty faint when the sun shows
but, I still can reach it as close, because of it my life so finely flows
the star would always be there with me till the end of time
for its not only glowing and surviving in the sky but deep inside my heart and soul

So bright, so loving and true, it made my life forever new

I miss the Star
My Father; He’s always there, shining above!

Author's Note

Lost!

Reviews

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A very poignant write, Pragati.

The loss of a parent is a serious blow to the heart. It is difficult to comprehend that someone who has been in our lives since the day we arrived, will no longer be ever present. The heart aches with every beat when they are no longer within arm's reach. But as you have written, they always remain in our heart and in our skies. Just looking down and sending us their warmth and light.

A lovingly written poem and a wonderful gesture and tribute to your Father. He would be proud and honoured to have such words written for him.

Courageous work.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Yes, Its like a deep stab on Heart!
But, I understand now that it's a part of Our life and It's a very long tym before so it's kind of bit less painful - I must say! Time heals :)

Thankyou soo much Doodley

[Haneefah]

I simply love this

[Haneefah]

Hmmm Pragyati , nice and wonderful heart catching write. I love the way you structured your piece. I know how it feels to lose someone.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Thankyou so very much Haneefah. Yes, It's hard to loose the person you adore

[Anshuman Aryav]

Heart touching and very emotional lines..... Pragati
I am going to share this amazing creation on my FB page...
Keep writing...

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Ohhhhh Thankyou for that Anshuman :)
Thanks a lot :)

[Anshuman Aryav]

Thank you also for sharing this creation with us...

[Raghib]

liked it very much, especially the theme

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Thankyou soo much Raghib :)

[Priyanshi]

Father described as the Star....really loved it...Lines are wonderful.
Keep on writing.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Thankyou soo much Priyanshi......
I hope you would love to hear I publish my own Poetry book :)

[Priyanshi]

Wow..amazing. so where have you published it.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Amazon!
Check my latest Post

[Priyanshi]

oh...great am surely gonna check it

[Pragati Chaudhary]

:)
Sure Priyanshi

[Najam Us Saher]

Heart touching. I am coming across many poems with star as a major theme and I love reading about them. This is an exceptional piece. Thank you so much for writing and sharing this.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Thankyou soo much Najam :)
M soo glad you liked it

[Najam Us Saher]

You're most welcome ☺

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful words shared about your father.
"I miss the Star
My Father; He’s always there, shining above!"
I believe all we can do. Is honor our father''s rules and make him proud. He is watching from a above. Thank you Pragati for sharing your words and thoughts.
Coyote

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Ohhhh! I am glad you could connect with my words
Thankyou dear Coyote :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I do and you are welcome. All we can do. Is follow the example of our kind elders.

[Shubham Sharma]

Too good...and the pain your poem instills upon the reader is ecstatic and strong. Such is the power of words written from own experience. Is the poem really based on your personal experience.(btw If its a figment of your imagination...I bow to you with respect.)

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Yup!
Thankyou soo much Shubham :)

[Jimmy Yetts]

A lovely bitter-sweet tribute.
Pure devotion portrayed in pure poetry.
Can only hope my children remember me nearly as fondly.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Thankyou soo much Jimmy!
I am sure your children Love you always & Forever :)

[Mirror]

i am sorry dear for the loss. it is good you still feel connected to him with the stars. Hold on to that.....

This is a very emotional write. well done.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Please don't be sorry dear
It's Life and we all have to leave this Earth someday!
but, I'll always hold on to him
Thankyou