Embrace the dance

Embrace the dance

A Poem by Patricia Wedel
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Iris adorn our garden with dreams...

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Iris love a rain dance 
in early May... 
with silver touches 
of memory... 

Visions of Mothers 
tending flowers... 
as Willows sway in 
wind-swept embraces...  

Colors of raspberry kisses 
and shadows of forever... 
hold our heart in 
Sycamore dreams... 

© 2017 Patricia Wedel


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May is one of my favorite months - being that Mother's Day always falls upon it, and it is also the wedding anniversary of my parents. I feel it's magical, always reminding us of the awakening of spring and all things possible.

Such a beautiful reading, and flower, Pat!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

6 Years Ago

dearest Kelly... Yes, the month of May is magical... your parent's anniversary and Iris bloom... The.. read more



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This is wonderfully captured Patricia. It made me remember my Gran and how when it was too wet to play outside, I used to sit on the kitchen countertop and watch all the flowers dance in the wind.
It also brought back to me the smiles, and the smell of chicken broth soup, which she was always magically making, like she knew just how many of us were coming to visit. Grans are magic like that :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


just awesome...u write amazing

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

6 Years Ago

Silence is golden like sand along a beach... Sounds are silver like the lining of a cloud... thank y.. read more
An a lovely blue it is, the iris with that tinge of yellow, lovely imagery and such a talent you display in your style Pat.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

6 Years Ago

dear Andrew... love being an artist of flowers in poetry ... to celebrate the beauty of God's promis.. read more
Have this habit of planting everything at the same time. Then waiting in awe as chaos reveals itself in bloom. Chelsea flower show will not be calling me.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

6 Years Ago

dear Paul, you plant flowers wild and free... the butterflies pollinate your blooms and beauty is sp.. read more
How I love the awakening flowers of spring, and the Iris are so glorious in their hues. Thank you for bringing them to light in your words. :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

6 Years Ago

dear Owl... you are wise in the ways of Spring... as you observe the opening of
possibilitie.. read more
A colourful tribute to a beautiful flower 🌺 pertinently perfect!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

6 Years Ago

dear Tom... Spring is a dance of emotions
when we embrace the colors of prisms of love and d.. read more
Yes, those memories hold our hearts in their soft velvety petals. The colors of springtime burst into a rainbow in your gentle tender words, my friend. So very pretty. I hope your Mother's Day was wonderful. Lydi**

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

6 Years Ago

dear Lydi... thank you for lingering a moment to enjoy the memories...
truly, Pat
I love your poems, they're always so garden and Nature aware, whichever the month!
As a past landscape designer, i've seen strong men heart-smile at the look of an area he'd asked me to create. To see someone feel the colour of Iris, or the movement of sycamore branches, is absolutely wonderful. Your words make me feel similarly, Patricia. Thank you!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

6 Years Ago

dear Emmajoy... you are a blessing... like Iris in May... you blend with the colors of Iris in all <.. read more
May is one of my favorite months - being that Mother's Day always falls upon it, and it is also the wedding anniversary of my parents. I feel it's magical, always reminding us of the awakening of spring and all things possible.

Such a beautiful reading, and flower, Pat!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

6 Years Ago

dearest Kelly... Yes, the month of May is magical... your parent's anniversary and Iris bloom... The.. read more
I love your ode to these hallmarks of the month of May, including a reference to mothers day! As may know from reading me, I love nature & you've painted it here so well. I love the references to different kinds of trees, both are trees I love here too. This is a delicious little tribute to all things "May"! *smile*

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Patricia Wedel

6 Years Ago

dear Barleygirl... Lovely to see all the flowers and trees awakening in the month of May. It envelo.. read more

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