Fading Phases

Fading Phases

A Poem by Priyanka Natesh
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Somewhere between being a half baked adolescent and a fresh adult, we miss naivety

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Where has the silence gone

That wafted and filled the empty heart with sheen

Where have the thoughts fled

That oozed and simmered the energy so

Where the emotion

Of inexplicable ecstasy

Where the essence of purity

When all that remains is tainted actions

Whence did love change me so

Whence did age deter me so

 

I long for the soul to quiver again

With emotion sublime

© 2015 Priyanka Natesh


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Dear Priyanka, this is so beautifully moving. It holds the bittersweet aching of life flowing past us... around us... yet somehow leaving us empty within. May this pure joy find itself growing within you like a wild garden... May you find the balance of living and loving... and yes, a soul quivering with an ocean of euphoric peace. It can be... and will be for you... I promise.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Priyanka Natesh

8 Years Ago

Mr Froman!! Oh your words and wishes mean so much to me. Thank you for the support :)
An owl on the moon

8 Years Ago

It is my joy and honor to travel with you on this journey of light... :)



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Beautiful piece.It really did move me! Keep on writing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wow..
Change is the name of life..
Your words, touched me to the core..
I loved the idea conveyed..

Enjoyed it.!

Posted 8 Years Ago


I do understand the poem.
"I long for the soul to quiver again
With emotion sublime"
Longing for things lost leave us wishing for old days and the emotion of new. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Priyanka Natesh

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much Sir :) I am so glad you understand
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

I did and you are welcome.
I wish I had words to put forth to show the extent that this poem moved me. It truly relates to me. It's been a while since I have been here and yours was the first poem I clicked on. I was glad I did :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Priyanka Natesh

8 Years Ago

Dushyant! Well I am glad too :) Thank you
Dear Priyanka, this is so beautifully moving. It holds the bittersweet aching of life flowing past us... around us... yet somehow leaving us empty within. May this pure joy find itself growing within you like a wild garden... May you find the balance of living and loving... and yes, a soul quivering with an ocean of euphoric peace. It can be... and will be for you... I promise.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Priyanka Natesh

8 Years Ago

Mr Froman!! Oh your words and wishes mean so much to me. Thank you for the support :)
An owl on the moon

8 Years Ago

It is my joy and honor to travel with you on this journey of light... :)

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Added on June 10, 2015
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Priyanka Natesh
Priyanka Natesh

Hyderabad, India



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Hello there! I'm Priyanka, a dreamer's soul, a Pisces incarnate ( ;) ), with endless aims and endless aspirations. I'm here to give a voice to my emotions, to get in touch with my true being, to me.. more..

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