From Above

If the world were a Lego set

From Above

Like Lego sets and building blocks

Seems so important and irrelevant at the same time

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Lost in a daydream…

I can control those tiny cars,

Put them on the right path… clear up some traffic

Shift buildings, make more space

There. That looks better

Fill up those drying lakes…

Add some mountains…

Trees! Yes, trees alongside every house…

Fresh air ought to make us more peaceful

More bakeries. Comforting aromas in the air…

That should make the people less agitated…

Lesser thoughts about terrorism and murder… right?

Pop in some juke boxes around every corner…

Singing and dancing… Lesser chaos and calmer egos, definitely

Not many money sucking, robot human industries

No… More cheese factories, yes! And handicrafts…

Arts, craft, music, dance!

That might make people hate each other less, no?

Jostle in homes for unsightly beggars. Dress them up… They deserve a life too

Hmm… More libraries for sure. Towering structures *giggles*

Oh yes! More animals! But in their own habitats.

With self protection tools!

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Turbulence jolting me back to reality

“Prepare for landing”

I am no giant anymore 

Reviews

[Urja Gokani]

amazingly written
keep it up
:)

[Kevin Andros]

Wow! Awesome Write! I was really transfixed reading this! I goes in like a dream and as going through the piece, feels like reality; as if the guy above really is actively changing things for the better.

"Turbulence jolting me back to reality" - loved the timing of this line.

It seemed to me that you didn't focus on rhyming as much getting your vision across. Does not rhyme, but has a wonderful rhythm. Loved this.

Keep Writing!

Best,
~KA~

[Coyote Poetry]

A interesting poem.
"Jostle in homes for unsightly beggars. Dress them up… They deserve a life too
Hmm… More libraries for sure. Towering structures *giggles*
Oh yes! More animals! But in their own habitats.
With self protection tools!"
I like the thoughts and the wishes in the poetry. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

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