The Pain Of Loss

He suffered and 

He tolerated, but

Never experienced,

The pain of being hated,

The pain of being rejected,

The pain of being betrayed,

The pain of being oppressed,

The pain of being intimidated,

The pain of being depressed.

Rather, he  passed through

The trauma of life.

The pain of loss 

The pain of loss of heart,

 That she broke away.

Reviews

[Prashant Bajpai]

i liked it but i request you to please add the meaining of few word like "trauma"

[Priyanshi]

Oops ! sorry for that...next time, I shall do it and thank you so much for your kind words.

[Prashant Bajpai]

no you need to be sorry but when we are writting we should keep ourselves in the writers shoe

[Priyanshi]

thank you....

[Prashant Bajpai]

Sorry it was not writers shoe it is reader shoe

[Priyanshi]

no problem, I did understand it.

[Najam Us Saher]

So painful poem..... I really liked this.

[Priyanshi]

Thank you , Najam, for your kind words.

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome. :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

Heartwarming it is, this won't let a reader stop for a second while reading ..loved it totally

[Priyanshi]

Thank you so much, Farhan for appreciating the poem.

[Surya]

It's a heart felt poem for me....I could relate...
Thank you Priyanshi for bringing those words out...
I loved it...:)

[Priyanshi]

Thank you so much, Surya. Pleasure is mine... And once again thank you for relating to it.

[Surya]

You're welcome...:)

[Mamta Sonowal]

This is such an amazing poem that I had ever read...

[Priyanshi]

Thank you so much, Mamta for your kind visit.

[Mamta Sonowal]

Ur most welcome...All this I say about ur poem is rlly amazing... I rlly liked it...

[Priyanshi]

Once again thank you so much for appreciating it.

[Priyanshi]

Thank you so much Rahul for praising and i will try to maintain it .

[Rahul]

Keep up the good work. And keep yourself uplifting through an every day of writing. I enjoy readin' your work. Always find something better and something of valuable outta your poetry. So never quit! Keep writing.

[Rahul]

First few opening lines're amazing... along with the rest of the whole poetry. You always maintain the depth of love, whether it's beloved or being broken, in words. Marvelously penned. Perhaps, it's so... heartfelt, though.