Widen Your Smile

Widen Your Smile

A Poem by Priyanshi


Today you are feeling sad and stressed.
Feels like to apart from this world.
But you have no idea that  behind you,
What's going on?
Your mom awaiting to see that smile again.
Sister is desiring to bring that  smile again to your lips.
Brother recalls past happy memories
and dad finding the reason what did hit you?
And you just lost in your world,
Totally depressed and hurt.
So just
stand up and call up your memories,
remember those people, who wanna
see you smile again,
at least smile for them, please
It's a request...... SMILE AGAIN
and bring COLORS to your life.
Don't think everything has vanished
and destroyed.
Think, an opportunity is waiting for you,
SO, Go and GRAB it and.....
WIDEN YOUR SMILE


© 2017 Priyanshi



Author's Note

Priyanshi
True emotions of mine that I penned it here....felt for one of my best friend.

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I dont know about others . . . but the last line really brought a smile on my face . . . truely motivating . . . veryyy simply written . . . i love this kind of writes where the deep emotions are described by such simple words . . . nice work priyanshi . . loved to read

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Priyanshi

4 Months Ago

Thank you so much, Pravir ...am glad for your kind visit and review....your review inspires me a lo.. read more



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this made me smile
you have a way with words.
that make others feel happy
wonderful stuff !!

Posted 1 Month Ago


Priyanshi

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much, Pia. I'm really happy to read your kind review.
Lovely way of depicting :)
Its tough to fight your inner demons and feel the people who actually love you!
& we always think about the one who left!

You are giving a strong inspiration priyanshi
Lovely work :)

Posted 2 Months Ago


Priyanshi

2 Months Ago

Thanks a lot, dear...I really appreciate the review and thanks for the read and review
Pragati Chaudhary

2 Months Ago

:) always dear!
Keep goin !
Priyanshi

2 Months Ago

Sure, friend.
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This poem is a true example of awareness. In this community my age is 8 days.. and after reading many poems, stories about love, break up, side effects.... Iam really glad that i stumbled upon this piece....
Now after 8 days i feel a little refreshed..
And will write a love-death story

Nice work priyanshi

Posted 2 Months Ago


Priyanshi

2 Months Ago

Thank you so much, Friend, for the kind review and visit....'m glad to read the review.
Good.. read more
Almost a "fake it 'til you make it" advisory. But your words are much more eloquent and well thought out. And...yes, smile for the ones you love that love you back.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Priyanshi

2 Months Ago

Thank you so much, friend, for the kind visit and review..
Simply beautiful!........

Posted 2 Months Ago


Priyanshi

2 Months Ago

Thank you ,dear, so much, for the kind visit and review..keep smiling.
I very much love your upbeat & uplifting message. I agree that we forget about the reasons we have to smile, when the dreary thoughts take over our minds. Being depressed much of my life, I’ve learned to look outside myself & try to reach out, which really DOES make me smile & forget the sad thoughts. Your message is spot-on & your manner of cheering people up feels genuine & friendly.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Priyanshi

2 Months Ago

hey, thank you, so so much for that..I always find your reviews encouraging .
Certainly a piece written with real emotion and a nice moral message.

Perhaps take a look at the first section of the piece and give it a thorough edit; needs some smoothing out for flow of expression.

Otherwise, a nice little write. Well intentioned and from a no doubt kind hearted soul.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Priyanshi

2 Months Ago

Okay, thank you so much for that...actually these days I'm bit busy, ..but will soon focus on that .. read more
Smiling now!! thanks for sharing this with us!!

Posted 2 Months Ago


Priyanshi

2 Months Ago

Thanks to you, for reading it and for the lovely review.
What a delightfully inspiring poem and written so well, it glides the reader from start to finish and then, for me, wraps my day with smiles. Perfect. Lovely.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Priyanshi

3 Months Ago

Hey, Thank you so much , friend for the kind review and visit...your review made my day..
This is a good solid poetical and expressive write, highlighting the importance of family support. Well penned my friend …

Posted 3 Months Ago


Priyanshi

3 Months Ago

Thank u so much, friend, for your kind review and visit.

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