Widen Your Smile

Today you are feeling sad and stressed.
Feels like to apart from this world.
But you have no idea that  behind you,
What's going on?
Your mom awaiting to see that smile again.
Sister is desiring to bring that  smile again to your lips.
Brother recalls past happy memories
and dad finding the reason what did hit you?
And you just lost in your world,
Totally depressed and hurt.
So just
stand up and call up your memories,
remember those people, who wanna
see you smile again,
at least smile for them, please
It's a request...... SMILE AGAIN
and bring COLORS to your life.
Don't think everything has vanished
and destroyed.
Think, an opportunity is waiting for you,
SO, Go and GRAB it and.....
WIDEN YOUR SMILE

Author's Note

True emotions of mine that I penned it here....felt for one of my best friend.

Reviews

[Pravir]

I dont know about others . . . but the last line really brought a smile on my face . . . truely motivating . . . veryyy simply written . . . i love this kind of writes where the deep emotions are described by such simple words . . . nice work priyanshi . . loved to read

[Priyanshi]

Thank you so much, Pravir ...am glad for your kind visit and review....your review inspires me a lot....thanks a lot, friend.

[Phill Oz O'fee]

This is a good solid poetical and expressive write, highlighting the importance of family support. Well penned my friend …

[Priyanshi]

Thank u so much, friend, for your kind review and visit.

[Prashant Bajpai]

poetry is always good when you pen your emotions

[Priyanshi]

Aw, thank you so much, Prashant, for the appreciating review.

[Prashant Bajpai]

dear ones are always welcome

[Im His Daughter]

Again, Priyanshi! This is wonderful thanks for making me widen my smile. :')

[Priyanshi]

Aww, I'm glad that it widened your smile....thank you so so so much, friend.

[writ rajat]

आज आप उदास और तनावग्रस्त महसूस कर रहे हैं
इस दुनिया से अ�™ग होने की तरह �™गता है
�™ेकिन आपको पता नहीं है कि आपके पीछे,
क्या च�™ रहा है?
तुम्हारी माँ उस मुस्कुराहट को फिर से देखने का इंतजार कर रही है।
बहन फिर से उस मुस्कुराहट को अपने होंठों में �™ाने की इच्छुक है।
भाई पिछ�™े यादों को याद करते हैं
और पिताजी ने आपको क्या कारण बताया?
और आप बस अपनी दुनिया में खो गए,
पूरी तरह से उदास और चोट �™गी
बस ऐसे
खड़े हो जाओ और अपनी यादों को बु�™ाओ,
उन �™ोगों को याद रखें, जो चाहते हैं
फिर से मुस्कुराओ,
कम से कम उनके �™िए मुस्कान, कृपया
यह एक अनुरोध है ...... स्माइ�™ी फिर से
और अपने जीवन में रंग �™ाओ
मत सोचो कि सब कुछ गायब हो गया है
और नष्ट कर दिया।
सोचो, एक अवसर आपके �™िए इंतजार कर रहा है,
अतः, जाओ और इसे गड़बड़ाना और .....
अपने मुस्कुराहट
Nice to read

[Priyanshi]

Hey, what's that..........hindi translation....amazing...really I loved it very much...
Thank you so much, glad to read that, in fact I'm smiling.thanks once again.

[writ rajat]

Keep smiling

[Priyanshi]

you too....friend.

[Mr.Writer]

Such a hopeful, inspiring poem to not give up and look up with a smile in the world...
It's really beautiful and well expressed...
Keep it up

[Priyanshi]

Thank you so much, Mr. Writer......I'm glad for your kind review and visit...I appreciate your words.

[Mr.Writer]

No problem :)

[rowan.taylorrr]

I needed this at the moment. I read this just at the right time, thank you for this. it's amazing

[Priyanshi]

That's so sweet of you, dear...I'm glad that you liked it...Thank you so so so much, xoxo ..

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

What an inspiring and uplifting poem this is! Just what I needed today! So true in so many ways. Love the honesty, flow, capitals for emphasis and the sweet positivity! Family references are very impactful Love this!

[Priyanshi]

Thank you so much, Annette.....Really I'm so so glad for your kind visit and review....Thanks once again.

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

You are very talented and very welcome dear Priyanshi!:)

[Zoya]

Yeah, I can feel it...In fact I know how it feels...to see your loved ones all gloomy and depressed. How we yearn to see their lost smile. Nicely penned.

[Priyanshi]

True, it pains when the near and dear ones in any problem and we are helpless ......Thank you Zoe , so much, dear.....Thank you once again for your kind visit and review.

[Zoya]

Most welcome!

[Great Aunt Astri]

Yes, I can feel the emotion in your poem for your best friend. Your words are full of power. Smiles certainly make you feel better, from friend, family strangers. And, do you know, if you smile first they usually smile back! Lovely read.

[Priyanshi]

Thank you so so much, dear ....i agree with your beautiful words..I'm glad for your kind review and visit.