Darkness

Darkness kills me.......

Every night,

Darkness brings me back

 those haunted nights, when

tears coursed down my cheeks.

Something hurts

I do not know, either

those unforgettable memories,

or  the pain of cold shoulder,

ceasing me; each moment

it did hollow out me.

 

But, I wanna damp down,

relief  myself, but heart, just

want to weep and weep.

and  ease the pain in  my heart,

'cos cries  release pain out, and

That will mend a part of my heart.

Reviews

[Surya]

Haan, bleesing heart with aching words.
I wanna say a word, Just cry hell out of you, one day you will be relieved...It's a great energy pls dont waste it weeping all time, just for few days be a water tank and then move away swiftly and find who you are....
Coming to your poem, i felt it to heart...I loved it totally...:)

[Priyanshi]

Thank you so much, Surya.....Yeah, right, I respect your words, friend... thank you once again.

[Surya]

It's my pleasure..:)

[barleygirl]

You've expressed "darkness" in a way that conveys a ton of feeling & even desperation. I'm not in favor of a message that's completely dark becuz I like showing contrasts -- everything in life has both black & white parts. But many writers often stick to the dark themes, and in this you have done a great job sounding original.

[Priyanshi]

Hahaha..Thank you so much maam, for the honest review and visit...even i'm the one who stick to the dark theme.

[Chase Dylan]

This mends the broken screams of my panged heart, or if not.. It at least eases them... A stoic write, and not hollow at all... Beautifully penned...

[Priyanshi]

Hey, thank you so much, Friend., for the kind words and revie.

[Pravir]

Very well written . . . short but very deep poetic lines . . i could easily feel each and every line . . . emotional one . . . but we have to overcome this
Lovely one

[Priyanshi]

Hey, thank you, so much pravir,, glad for your kind visit and review...

[Great Aunt Astri]

A heart felt poem. We can find poetry, even in the dark.

[Priyanshi]

Yeah, maam true,....Thank you so much, for your kind words..thanks once again.

[pragya gaur]

Nicely penned priyanshi ji as kesha ji said...I really loved it

[Priyanshi]

Thank you, sweet girl for your kind words and visit...glad that you loved it.

[Kesha]

A great poem, very elegant, I think the font really fits it well too! Nicely penned dear :)

[Priyanshi]

Hey, thank you , Kesha...'m really glad that you liked it....thanks for your kind review and visit.

[Kesha]

My pleasure

[Cory Barrett]

darkness is a funny thing. its intresting to me that to so many it brings about fear. I've always found the darkness too comforting. As though the day said , "you've made it this far, relax". The light is when all the ambitions and ideas come to action. terrifying.

Good writing

[Priyanshi]

Thank you so much, friend....glad for your kind visit and review.

[Zephyr]

Tears heal wounds.
An emotional work Dear:)
I can relate.
Keep writing!

[Priyanshi]

Thank you Neetha, so much......'m glad to know that you could relate to it.....thanks dear.

[Farhan Shaikh]

I am agree with Surya, btw it is a very nicely penned and expressed your feeling really well..

[Priyanshi]

Thank you so much, Farhan.....'m glad that you liked it...thanks once again .

[wordman]

tears washes the soul,pain comes with life,especially with love

[Priyanshi]

Yeah, you're right ....Thank you so much friend.....'m glad for your kind visit and review.

[wordman]

my pleasure