Darkness

Darkness

A Poem by Priyanshi
"

Darkness kills me.......

"


Every night,

Darkness brings me back

 those haunted nights, when

tears coursed down my cheeks.

Something hurts


I do not know, either

those unforgettable memories,

or  the pain of cold shoulder,

ceasing me; each moment

it did hollow out me.

 

But, I wanna damp down,

relief  myself, but heart, just

want to weep and weep.

and  ease the pain in  my heart,

'cos cries  release pain out, and

That will mend a part of my heart.


© 2017 Priyanshi



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Haan, bleesing heart with aching words.
I wanna say a word, Just cry hell out of you, one day you will be relieved...It's a great energy pls dont waste it weeping all time, just for few days be a water tank and then move away swiftly and find who you are....
Coming to your poem, i felt it to heart...I loved it totally...:)

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Priyanshi

6 Months Ago

Thank you so much, Surya.....Yeah, right, I respect your words, friend... thank you once again.
Surya

6 Months Ago

It's my pleasure..:)



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You've expressed "darkness" in a way that conveys a ton of feeling & even desperation. I'm not in favor of a message that's completely dark becuz I like showing contrasts -- everything in life has both black & white parts. But many writers often stick to the dark themes, and in this you have done a great job sounding original.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Priyanshi

4 Months Ago

Hahaha..Thank you so much maam, for the honest review and visit...even i'm the one who stick to the .. read more
This mends the broken screams of my panged heart, or if not.. It at least eases them... A stoic write, and not hollow at all... Beautifully penned...

Posted 4 Months Ago


Priyanshi

4 Months Ago

Hey, thank you so much, Friend., for the kind words and revie.
Very well written . . . short but very deep poetic lines . . i could easily feel each and every line . . . emotional one . . . but we have to overcome this
Lovely one

Posted 5 Months Ago


Priyanshi

5 Months Ago

Hey, thank you, so much pravir,, glad for your kind visit and review...
A heart felt poem. We can find poetry, even in the dark.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Priyanshi

5 Months Ago

Yeah, maam true,....Thank you so much, for your kind words..thanks once again.
Nicely penned priyanshi ji as kesha ji said...I really loved it

Posted 5 Months Ago


Priyanshi

5 Months Ago

Thank you, sweet girl for your kind words and visit...glad that you loved it.
A great poem, very elegant, I think the font really fits it well too! Nicely penned dear :)

Posted 5 Months Ago


Priyanshi

5 Months Ago

Hey, thank you , Kesha...'m really glad that you liked it....thanks for your kind review and visit.
Kesha

5 Months Ago

My pleasure
darkness is a funny thing. its intresting to me that to so many it brings about fear. I've always found the darkness too comforting. As though the day said , "you've made it this far, relax". The light is when all the ambitions and ideas come to action. terrifying.

Good writing

Posted 6 Months Ago


Priyanshi

6 Months Ago

Thank you so much, friend....glad for your kind visit and review.
Tears heal wounds.
An emotional work Dear:)
I can relate.
Keep writing!

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Priyanshi

6 Months Ago

Thank you Neetha, so much......'m glad to know that you could relate to it.....thanks dear.
I am agree with Surya, btw it is a very nicely penned and expressed your feeling really well..

Posted 6 Months Ago


Priyanshi

6 Months Ago

Thank you so much, Farhan.....'m glad that you liked it...thanks once again .
tears washes the soul,pain comes with life,especially with love

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Priyanshi

6 Months Ago

Yeah, you're right ....Thank you so much friend.....'m glad for your kind visit and review.
 wordman

6 Months Ago

my pleasure

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