A Letter

A Letter

A Story by Priyanshi

"Dear Sameer,  

          FRIENSHIP……what's  the most important for you? and HATRED….this was what I loved the most.....because my so called good friends betrayed me. you are too my friend , not a good friend, but best friend and you develop a ray of hope in me…did you remember the day when we meet for the first time, in the Sebastian garden.  I left my diary there and when I came back in worseness finding it, you handed it to me safely. And you even expressed your guilty for reading it, as it attracted you. In fact , you whispered something in my ear, "Broken hearts can be mended too, come to me I'll mend it." Your words just left an influence upon me. I felt as if  my heart found a medicine to cure itself… "expressed Mercy in hearty words, with a smile on her lips, that regaining the lost smile of her.

      "Since that day, you  had asked me my problems and you had guided me in the right direction .  You made me realize that inner beauty is worthy …in fact , I even realised that a weak glass was now on the way to become a bullet proof glass... Did you even remember those meetings, we shared talks and gossiped for hours and hours and your friends called you a gossip queen. All those moments just , when I remember, feels like I've attained my heaven, I felt as if rain of blessings and happiness I did have….you even acted more of a like my guide than a friend ..and  got me solved each issue of my life. Moreover, I depended on you. Huh!portraying each moment that left her in happiness after her dreadful life.

"One day in life while starring in the calm at the night sky, I thought that you would never leave me …never ever you can do this. But who knew this wasn't  planned in our life. Yesterday you said that you need to shift in another state due to family reason, I wasn't shocked. Because I thought that we will be in connection. I had full faith in God and upon you . Alas, you let me down. You said, we were never friends and cannot be ever because you had been my guide and nothing more than that. That knocked me so badly, my mind felt the drill of a hole in it. What did I ask you ? Only just a hand of a friend whose still helped me and wished that you could be there in future too…you decided not to befriend with me…I was left alone and I needed an arm to cry over it and to solve my problems ." Tears of blood flowed down her cheeks."Though none could be as good as you were to me….but death wasn't that rough.  I was in need so death provided a help to me…I'll surrender myself to death and I'll be no more  there to irritate you , and to annoy you….I am not going to even bid you goodbye, because after my death I'll   be around you, huh! I've never wanted the distance of soul

                    Reading the letter, Sameer was no more standing on his knees. He fell on the surface and his hands were trembling reading the letter. Drop by drop tears leaked from his eyes and after completing it…he sobbed so badly …yelled and yelled…but none to give him that arm, which Mercy wanted to . She wanted to pay back all that she received from him.

 

 

© 2017 Priyanshi


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Priyanshi
A fiction... hope it is good.

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As I said you improved a lot....An interesting story blown with emotions....I loved it...:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Priyanshi

6 Years Ago

Thank uuuuu so much, fur your kind review and visit.
great story,creative and interesting

Posted 6 Years Ago


Priyanshi

6 Years Ago

thank u so so much for your kind review on my story
I liked the creativity and the way you expressed your emotions.
Is she alive or dead ? That's the only thing you didn't mention clearly.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Priyanshi

6 Years Ago

sorry for I didn't arranged them properly.....and as a answer for your question she is dead......tha.. read more
Najam Us Saher

6 Years Ago

Okay.....you're welcome.
Loved how you weaved this together. Great work

Posted 6 Years Ago


Priyanshi

6 Years Ago

thank u so so much for your appreciation for this story
Amazing as always..it was so emotional..feelings were well portrayed...and I liked it....no, wait..I loved it :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Priyanshi

6 Years Ago

hahaha.....thank u so so much for such a kind review
Sofia

6 Years Ago

Always welcome :)
A heartbreaking, emotional and powerful story...
The ending was heartwrenching, and I just love the letter format you put it into...
The feeling of regret, and sorrow were well portrayed Priyanshi!
Well done, keep it up!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Priyanshi

6 Years Ago

Thank u so so much, for the appreciation and your visit....you understood it very well...thanks aga.. read more
Mr.Writer

6 Years Ago

No problem :)

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