A Lonely Street

A Lonely Street

A Poem by Priyanshi
"

It's just an imagination.

"

A lass rambling alone in  a street,

Hedged by murky street lights.

Her gloomy eyes gazed at

Those murky street lights

All of a sudden, a little girl rushed

And hold her from the back.

The lassie looked  back,

but Alas! None was there.

She remembers her little sister,

Who is no more with  her.

She recalls her deep sick  memories

Memories as  deep as  a well.

 She gained pain again

with tears bursting her eyes

and she walked ahead in lonely street.


© 2017 Priyanshi



Author's Note

Priyanshi
Another try by me and my little cute, cousin, Madhu.
Hope you like it.
Thank u, Surya.

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Thats really good work :)

Posted 2 Months Ago


Priyanshi

2 Months Ago

Thank you so much, friend, for the kind visit and review.
Pragati Chaudhary

2 Months Ago

:) you are welcome Priyanshi :)
imagining that lost loved one still holding us, protecting us...
you create a haunting feeling with this one, Priyanshi.
j.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Priyanshi

2 Months Ago

Yep, that was the motive of mine and my cousin...thank you so much for the kind review and visit.
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Zoe
Ah, quite sad. We always do grieve the loss of our loved ones...they're hard to forget. Was a bit scary to read. Good job.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Priyanshi

2 Months Ago

Scary..hmm...it is..Thank you so much, dear, for the kind review and visit.
Zoe

2 Months Ago

My pleasure!
I have often said that the loved ones & pets who've died are following me along & I can feel them like they're on my shoulder watching me. In your poem, you take this idea further as if the departed one is a haunting ghost following & tormenting. Good way to tell a story within a pretty short poem, as it feels complete & takes the reader on a journey.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Priyanshi

2 Months Ago

yeah, that's true, Thanks a ton for the kind review and visit...'m glad to read the comment.
Aww a very sad write! Indeed heartbreaking, but beautifully written :)

Posted 2 Months Ago


Priyanshi

2 Months Ago

Hey...after a long time...am happy to see you again...thank you so much, dear for the lovely review .. read more
Kesha

2 Months Ago

Decided to come back for a bit :) lol and you are very welcome :)
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mou
it melts the heart..very sad yet you describe it with so much strength that anyone could relate with it..beautiful Priyanshi

Posted 3 Months Ago


Priyanshi

3 Months Ago

Thank you sooo much, Mou...'m glad that for the kind review and visit.Thanks once again.
mou

3 Months Ago

most welcome :)
A good picture you painted Priyanshi!
Thanks for writing and sharing this poetess!
Also a big thank you to your cousin:)

Posted 3 Months Ago


Priyanshi

3 Months Ago

Okay, thank you so so much from me and my cousin , dear...glad to read the kind review.
good try my dear blessings


Posted 3 Months Ago


Priyanshi

3 Months Ago

thank you so much friend fot the kind review and visit.
Please do not add dear.don't mind it.. read more
touching write,sad thoughts

Posted 3 Months Ago


Priyanshi

3 Months Ago

Thank you Friend so much for kind visit and words.
 wordman

3 Months Ago

my pleasure
such a nycc work.....i loved it...and i wud evn appreciate su for this...

Posted 3 Months Ago


Priyanshi

3 Months Ago

Hey, dear, thank you sooo much for the appreciation.

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