Only With You

 

You are my secluded home.

My love for you and up to you.

My frustration for you and from you.

My secrets gathered up in the wardrobe of yours.

My love in the bed with you and only for you.

An opus of love, I find blooming in the air.

Twinge of emotions in the arms of yours,

Leaving the night pillow dry.

Rapture moments  with you on the couch,

Along an infinite of chortle with you.

My journey of life on the highway

All the time, only with you…

Only with you.

Reviews

[Abhishek Asthana]

So dedicated one... A kind of writing which brings a silent smile on your face and seriously no one can resist from smiling... Beautifully written priyanshi

[Priyanshi]

Hey, glad to see your review....after a long time....and thank you so much, for the kind review.

[Abhishek Asthana]

Yeah that's why I shared a blog for my co-writers before reading their work

[Priyanshi]

Okay, i must see it then.

[pia]

this is beautiful.
the words bring peace to me while i read it the sentences are worded to flow smoothly
this is artistic work

[Priyanshi]

A huge compliment for me.
Thank you so much, Pia, for the lovely review.

[MAC]

oh my....if only! This is lovely, so lovely...

[Priyanshi]

Thank you so much, friend, for the lovely review.

[AcasualPawn]

Nice use of words filled with emotions...
Nicely penned priyanshi

[Priyanshi]

Thank you SSR for the wonderful comment.

[Joey Nizz]

Such a lovely read, you wrote this with a lot of love and beauty.
Well wrote Priyanshi

[Priyanshi]

Thank you so much Joey, for the lovely review and visit.

[Joey Nizz]

Your very much welcome ^^

[Tony Jordan]

They are...before all else.
The contradictions of love - the light and shade.
Excellent Priyanshi

[Priyanshi]

Thank you so much, Friend...am glad to read your review...thanks for the read and review.

[wordman]

only you,a beautiful word to hear and cherish

[Priyanshi]

Hey, Thank you so much for the kind review and visit.

[wordman]

my pleasure

[DiaryKay]

Its description of emotions are quite revealing!! Hurting yet loving!! A lovely twist Priyanshi... You are a genius with a pen!!

[Priyanshi]

I don't think that I'm genius with pen, but so much thanks to you...am glad to read the lovely review.

[Carol Cashes]

"My frustration for you and from you."
"Along an infinite of chortle with you."

These two lines perfectly describe a marriage of love.

Sweetly penned, Priyanshi.

[Priyanshi]

Yep, thank you so much, friend, for the lovely review and visit.

[Zoya]

This was beautifully penned...The last words do leave an impact. Lovely write

[Priyanshi]

Thank you so much,Zoe, for the lovely review and visit.

[Zoya]

My pleasure :)