My Love!

written for valentine week contest after summoning love in my heart for my friends and then visualizing it for someone special.

I don't say, I will die for you

But, I will say, I will live

To at least bring, a smile to your lips.

I may sometimes, forget things

But, everything of you, for you and

By you, will be a thing of great concern.

I am liable to be impatient at times

But, will always try to

Hear you, with all the patience.

I don't say, for you, I will bring stars from the sky

But, will try

To brighten your life, with cheers.

I can't say, life will always bring happiness

But, promise to be there, to dry your tears,

Help you, hold you in arms and to share.

I may not proclaim my love, over and over again

But my smile, concern, patience, cheers

And sharing, will tell you subtly, that

I always care for you.

Reviews

[zainul]

Very soothing and heartening message,my dear poet.
Each word of the piece is a flower emitting fragrance of love.
I can feel your lively and natural gesture of assurance from the beginning to the end of the golden piece.
I have chosen this stanza as my favorite:
" I may not proclaim my love, over and over again
But my smile, concern, patience, cheers
And sharing, will tell you subtly, that
I always care for you."

[Prritiy]

Thankyou so much for you affectionate words. Your deep understanding is gratefully felt. :)

[Prritiy]

Thankyou so much for you affectionate words. Your deep understanding is gratefully felt. :)

[zainul]

You are most welcome,lovely friend :)
You deserve all credit and recognition.
You are revealing your talent day by day.

[Prritiy]

:)

[zainul]

:)

[MoriartyMesa]

There was some much underline emotion in this, and it came through like a charging Rhino. I enjoyed this and hope to read more.

[Stella Armour]

how lovely.. a very tender and caring poem you have penned here..

[Prritiy]

Thanks a lot Stella, sorry it escaped me.
Best Wishes

[Glen Yumang Manese]

This has a pledge in a sense... as a reader keeps pulled in by the vindication...

[Prritiy]

Thankyou Glen for giving your precious time. :)

[Gaurav Walia]

nice piece...

[Prritiy]

Thankyou :)

[Sami Khalil]

A very nice poem. I like it a lot...:)

[Prritiy]

Heartfelt thanks for appreciation.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Prritiy]

:)

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)

[MOON]

Lovely write and heartfelt message.

[Prritiy]

Thank you so much for your lovely words.