she is my mother

she is my mother

A Poem by Prritiy
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originally written in my language Hindi (http://prritiy.blogspot.in/2011/01/blog-post.html), but i believe the essence is there.

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She is my Mother


love flows continuously
improving the world smilingly
striving for good of all persons

who has taught me these lessons

she is my mother

 
sharing of, all acquires
showing mirror to desires
family comes first always
who showed me these ways

she is my mother

sleeping sometimes discontent

filling, every heart with content
jaggery is sweeter than sweets
who preached sacrifice
concretes

she is my mother

giving warmth to young
showing reverence to elder
giving up self-pride for other
who showed the mode of honor

she is my mother

get respect always by all

considered lovable by all
smilingly, face the obstacles

from where, got these counsels

she is my mother

astute just like mother
industrious just like mother
today I am beloved daughter
who gave me this lovable
candor


she is my mother

 



© 2013 Prritiy



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Great shoutout to her! I bet she'd love it

Posted 3 Years Ago


Lovely tribute to your mother. God bless your mother and loving daughter like you.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Prritiy

4 Years Ago

Thankyou so much Sir Ency for your kind words :)
Gentle and lovely poem, your mother should be proud of that demonstration of love. Beautifully expressed

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Prritiy

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your sweet words.
Your love for your mom is evident from every line you have written. May god bless you both.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Prritiy

4 Years Ago

Thanks a lot Rhiti, am glad you liked it :)
Beautiful written Prritiy. I hope yours has read this lovely Poem.
Thank you so much for sharing with us.
Leo

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Prritiy

4 Years Ago

Thanks a lot for the appreciation and time spared. Yes my Ma did read this and liked it, though othe.. read more
Leonard Birch

4 Years Ago

Yes, we do have that stigma, but I find that there a great deal of people who are learning the beaut.. read more
Prritiy

4 Years Ago

yes thats true :)
Great writting here
nicely done
really interesting to read

Posted 4 Years Ago


Prritiy

4 Years Ago

Thankyou very much.
ayosonolowo

4 Years Ago

You're welcom
Great emotion in this, I love it. Good work!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Prritiy

4 Years Ago

Thanks a lot Keith.
I hope she has read this. Very nicely done

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Prritiy

4 Years Ago

Yes she did. Thankyou so much Cassie.
Beautiful write and tribute to your mother.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Prritiy

4 Years Ago

Thankyou so much :)
both the versions are written beautifully... :) loved the way of expressing your thoughts :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Prritiy

4 Years Ago

Thanks a lot Divya :)

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Tags: mother, love, lessons, desires, family, warmth, reverence, elder, daughter, candor

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