How do I Love U

written from a man's side.

How do I love you

take you to vast regimes

and proclaim my love

or cuddle you in my arms 

and let the warmth speak,

take you to Venice

and canoe in sparkling water

or invite a long met friend

and leave you to chatter,

order a snack for you

and pamper you

or try a hand at your favorite

and show my care,

throw a bash to celebrate your day

and treat you as a queen

or arrange for a visit to your ailing aunt

and fulfill your desire,

take you for shopping

and a candlelit dinner

or catch the longing desire in your eyes

and surprise you with that cherished saree,

holding you should i whisper

sweet nothings in your ear

or let my actions gently

proclaim my love to you

Tell me my dear

how do I love you.

Reviews

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

All women wanted to be treated like what you have mentioned above. If I could be a man, I could also do the best that I can to make my woman happy.
But I know that it is just written in a man's point of view, and yet a woman's heart is wishing the same things to be felt by her. :)
This is an ideal poem for an unselfish love...considering things not for himself but to his loved one.
Great!

[Prritiy]

yes i thought what a woman, we want and then wrote it :)
thanks a lot for your precious time and words.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful journey in your words. Love should take us to good places. To celebrate beautiful location with the special people we love. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Prritiy]

Thankyou so much for beautiful feelings portrayed through your words. I am honored.

[Ency Bearis]

Spellbound creativity, nice words indeed.

[Prritiy]

Thanks a lot for your gracious visit and encouraging words.

[Subrat]

Nothing dear...as a boy if these words are uttered by my beloved. Its enough...no need to do anythng else.

[Prritiy]

hahahaha Subrat :) thats right :)

thanks for your kind visit and lovely words.

[An owl on the moon]

A beautiful voiced perspective, the heart of love flowing so wondrously... a heart longing to please and bring joy... And yes, there are so many ways.. some big and loud.. some small and quiet.. and all confess the depth of love's life.

[Prritiy]

Thankyou so much by gracing this write with your visit and kind words.

[DIVYA]

This is so full of sweet love's adoration. Lucky is she to have such an ardent lover. Time for her to revel in the love and to be pampered. Great feeling you expressed here Prritiy. A very elating, uplifting read.

[Prritiy]

Thankyou so much Divya for your precious time and words.

[DIVYA]

You are welcome Prritiy.

[Prritiy]

:) .............

[Vikrantsingh]

Wow this is romantic.. I love it Prritiy :)
Wonderful share :)

Singh :)

[Prritiy]

Thanks a lot, glad you liked it. :)

[Vikrantsingh]

You're Welcome :) Dearie :)

[Sami Khalil]

I think you meant to treat him as a king unless you are referring to someone else. An amazing romantic poem full of lover's promises and expectations that any man will look forward to that...Excellent...:)

[Prritiy]

Yeah Sami one expects only when one is ready to give more than that and obviously a queen would treat her man as a King :).

Thankyou so much my intelligent friend, have a wonderful week ahead.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...Any time...:)

[Prritiy]

........... :)

[Sami Khalil]

^^~:)...............

[Prritiy]

ahaan today batman flew away it seems :P

you know what ~:) this symbol is somewhat similar to one of the Hindu Gods 'Ganesha' who has elephant trunk over normal body and according to Hindu scriptures he is the deity who is worshiped the first :)

[Sami Khalil]

Wow . I did not know . The system is acting funny . Have a great one...:)

[Prritiy]

:) ..............

[Sami Khalil]

:)...................

[one sky]

The poem was written to a man's side but actually those are what a woman expect from her man...LOL.

If ever my man could do all of that to me, nor say those words to me, I would be the happiest woman in the world. Taking someone to Venice...ah, that requires a lot of effort...and money. You're a lucky girl if you receive such effort, girl.

This poem is so sweet...so romantic. I like the way you express it in a male's voice. You are really creative, Prritiy. Keep it up!

[Prritiy]

Yes Margaux you are right-those are what a woman expect from her man. that is why it was easy for me to write, and quite good to share with 'a man' to let him know what a woman expects ;)

Thanks a lot dear :)