Winter, Haiku Series

Winter, Haiku Series

A Poem by Pryde Foltz


Winter Cardinal
winter cardinal
glides across an ashen sky ...
a red lipstick smile




January Crow
january crow
blemishes the white and caws
look … things could be worse




The Sleeping Grizzly
the sleeping grizzly
stirs from his slumber and growls
the forest is silent

© 2014 Pryde Foltz


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such brilliant words... the first one was the best but they are all good

Posted 10 Years Ago


Ok! Now, last one phrase chuckle me! Ha!
Yeah, your just on your ways, foltzz..your going cool. Am feeling your stuffs're very good as same as before and am again still enjoying reading your stuffs even I've just remaining few couple of hours to be here so, am just focusing on your stuffs to read as much as I can before leaving the site again ... so, I hope, my reviews're not gonna bother you at all. LOL!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Pryde Foltz

10 Years Ago

Thanks, Neon.
Lovely images of winter, expecially the first one.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Pryde Foltz

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Marie.
loved the lesson of winter and it`s beautiful creatures

Posted 10 Years Ago


Pryde Foltz

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Ron.
Ah, you put them all together here....good graphics too. Hell, I would be afraid of that growling grizzly myself. Hopefully crows and cardinals are not on his chosen menu! Well written Haiku. Lydi**

Posted 10 Years Ago


Pryde Foltz

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Lydi**
Very fun Pryde. Bird watching takes on an entirely new meaning once that grizzly wakes up.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Pryde Foltz

10 Years Ago

It does. Thank you, Jack.
I like your winter wonderland and this Haiku series...Bravo

Posted 10 Years Ago


Pryde Foltz

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Sami.
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome...:).....................
the January crow is thinking: stay asleep mr grizzly, stay asleep.. while that cardinal wants to plant a red lipstick kiss on yon sleeping bear. Pryde I'm not sure this means the forest is quiet.. nope noisy as hell... enjoyed these haiku very much, very wintery. ~~redzone

Posted 10 Years Ago


Pryde Foltz

10 Years Ago

A possible interpretation. Mostly, I think the bear is just wanting everyone to settle down so her c.. read more
redzone

10 Years Ago

hmmm, perhaps but it's a losing effort since very soon cubs, birds, all forest life are back to thei.. read more
Pryde Foltz

10 Years Ago

Tell me about it; this mom has a head cold.

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