My Lucky Stars, Incommunicato

"be fruitful; avoid self-assassination"

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Published in Strays. Available on Amazon.

Strays is a collection of two extended narratives and more than forty love-themed poems, exploring the meaning of romantic love while we have it and attempting to find the healing after its loss. Found within these pages is the short story Gutter Dog, the novelette Ginni, and the poems False Skin, the Boy Who Wore Clothes, and the Black-Wit Reveller.

Reviews

[TL Boehm]

biology on overkill. I wish I'd written that line.

[Pryde Foltz]

A line won in the school of hard rocks for sure:)

[L. Edward Neale]

Meloncholic Ooze. That primoridial sadness. Ikky stikky post breakup fallout. Can be poetically delicious. In this case: exquisite. Gadzooks! Is it better to have loved and lost than to have never loved?

[Pryde Foltz]

Hey, you. Who let you back in? Great to see you, Lee. I suppose it is better to have loved and then wrote poetry;)

[L. Edward Neale]

Yeah, couldn't help myself. Bad habits die hard! Came back to keep an eye on you. Heard you were a trouble maker!

[Pryde Foltz]

Guilteeeeeeeee

[Jack...]

My friend Pryde, these clipped wings will reform, that one giant leap will fade into a memory and those lucky stars will nestle themselves deep in your pocket ready for use. Sad, strong and truthful.

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Jack.

[Blue]

I thought you only write senryus! :) This is brilliant, Pryde. Your wordplay and content is truly amazing. You are a genius. Ahh, I'm really saving this one.

[Pryde Foltz]

So kind, Thank you, Arzel.

[David Scott]

How is it possible not yo fly when we are so committed to it? How? We know we can fly! Yet the ground meets us with a painful reality. You gave him your trust, your all... His belief is different. Even if you could fly, were actually flying, he would not share the reality.
This is heartbreaking because it is such a waste of life's most fantastic gift...
A true yet sad concluding.

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, David.

[RichGee]

Very very nice! Sad yet humorous but truthful...You write splendidly!

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Rich.

[RichGee]

Mi placer.

[s y e]

Woohoo, girl you honestly rock. This is so beautiful and sad but I loved it. It was magnificent.

[Pryde Foltz]

Smiling big time, here. Thank you, Noodle.

[Shaquana Adams]

I took the greatest leap
jumped without looking, believing I’d soar
alone … accomplished not even a wing beat

Very beautiful and sad. Interesting and lovely write :)

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Shaquana.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

They say silence is golden…. but it is tarnished when that silence is from someone you love…. Very nicely written.

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Rock and Roll.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are very welcome

[Baby Ricochet]

And so it goes in matters of the heart. A heartbreaking, darkly humorous tale. Well done

[Pryde Foltz]

You got it. Thank you, Baby.