Undead Detritus

Undead Detritus

A Poem by Pryde Foltz
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Undead Detritus




Published in Monsters




© 2014 Pryde Foltz



Author's Note

Pryde Foltz
Monsters contains the short story series Demons, Harlots and Crones, which follows two generations of the Demeere family and its legacy of spite and envy. Included in the series is Demon in High Socks; Holler it out with Lemonade; the Old Lady, Her Plymouth, and Cockroaches; Sex in a Pan; and the Fire Crone and Stone Harlot. Also within Monster’s pages are fifty-odd poems exploring the darker side of human nature and its undeniable conclusion. Two Orphan Sparrows, the Devil is a DJ, the Last Striptease, Beware of Librarians Promising Freedom and many more titles are found within. Ultimately monster asks the reader to look at the darkness found within herself and by facing it, perchance move beyond.

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Very breathtaking poem. Your voice and the elegant wordplay are captivating the splendor. I'm amazed. Keep it up. :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Pryde Foltz

3 Years Ago

Very kind. Thank you, Jeannette.
Different but WOW such a choice of words
and so stunning your work leaves me speechless
it is always so magical.



Blessings. Benita

Posted 3 Years Ago


Pryde Foltz

3 Years Ago

Thank you, Benita:)
Benita c Staebelll - KindredPoet

3 Years Ago

you're welcome. :)
' But unlike a shattered heart .. A broken mirror cannot hold a memory..'

To hear your words tumble this tale is incredibly moving and real.. whether imagined or experienced hurt rarely fails to alert a being to move on further, higher. And yet, there's a fragile feeling running through your words, a weakness of spirit, a heart so near to death. But reading a third time, there's somehow a strength.. .. mayhaps you've felt the emotion of..

Posted 3 Years Ago


Pryde Foltz

3 Years Ago

Thank you, Emma … I think just acceptance:)
Wonderful. I love the imagery of falling leaves in any context, but I especially like how flawlessly it melded with the breaking heart line - and that the relationship aspect didn't overwhelm the falling leaf word choice.
Thanks for sharing

Posted 3 Years Ago


Pryde Foltz

3 Years Ago

Thank you, C Rose.
It creates a mystery and absorbs the reader into the story.
Lovely.
Thank you for sharing.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Pryde Foltz

3 Years Ago

Thank you, Angad.
Angad Waraich

3 Years Ago

You're most welcome
leaves cutting cracks in the cold air. a stellar write. love the atmosphere in this, the tone of it.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Pryde Foltz

3 Years Ago

Thank you, Tammy.
I heard this first on your YouTube channel...
I am both steel and glass I my heart and your words pricked the blood with the memory of my won shards...
Powerful!
Sensitive!
Magical write!


Posted 3 Years Ago


 David Scott

3 Years Ago

Beyond fond for me Pryde. You made the blood flow within the wounds of my won memeories, but I a go.. read more
Pryde Foltz

3 Years Ago

It's about the healing ... and it makes perfect sense when you've been where we have been.
 David Scott

3 Years Ago

I think we understand each other on this matter... ;)
Thank you again for the experience of h.. read more
Have to say I'm a little confused by this. And I'm not entirely sure why

Posted 3 Years Ago


Pryde Foltz

3 Years Ago

Thank you, Sunny. It is a metaphoric piece and it is meant to draw on symbolic meaning and does ask.. read more
Sunny

3 Years Ago

Lol well thanks for explaining it to me :-)
"Leaves fall and they thrilled me
Cutting cracks in the cold still air"

The imagery and the metaphor are wonderful. Love cuts like a knife....how true this is. Listening to you read your words makes this even better. Congrats on this one and others being published...certainly deserved! Lydi**

Posted 3 Years Ago


Pryde Foltz

3 Years Ago

Thanks, Lydi**.
still strong emotions ... felt from a love that once was...a very sad yet lovely piece here ..

I also listened to your reading on this ..well done..

Posted 3 Years Ago


Pryde Foltz

3 Years Ago

Thank you, Fran.
  Fran Marie

3 Years Ago

you're so welcome;

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Added on September 30, 2014
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Pryde Foltz
Pryde Foltz

Vancouver, Canada



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I post almost exclusively spoken word pieces these days through youtube. If you like a theatrical approach to poetry you will enjoy friendship with me. If you are a strictly a black word on white pape.. more..

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