Spider

Creation is a step beyond fear

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Reviews

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An interesting poem, Pryde.

A very well written piece with a strong choice or words and theme. I like the use of a spider and its web as a metaphor for life. One must always keep tiptoeing across the fragile strands of one's life and push themselves to their outer limits to create a future. Each tiny step forward can either snap the thread or lead us on to greater heights.
I am still getting used to the format you use. It is cutting edge and nicely done either way. Nice work.

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Doodley. Lots of this kind of thing to be found on youtube:):):):)

[LittleBear]

Nice work! This was refreshing.

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, LittleBear:)

[genocide]

very good spider poem of a spider going down a web

[Pryde Foltz]

The spider might just be you. Thank you, genocide:)

[icelandicblue]

A tightrope walk across the abyss whether the strands are frayed or not. One must believe there is another footstep to be taken. If you believe it is there, you will find it.

[Pryde Foltz]

Absolutely. Nice to see you, Icyblue:)

[Alfred Kukitz]

I've mastered the sweet sound of your voice as the spiders sing enchantment entangling my soul.

Regards,
Al

[Pryde Foltz]

They mean well ... those spiders. Thank you, Al:)

[An owl on the moon]

I happen to love spiders in their mystery and beauty and artistry (even feeding those who come to my gardens), and you speak so fluidly of this mystery awakening through the woven strands of life and light. Beautifully voiced.

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Craig. I like spiders too ... but at distance:):):)

[An owl on the moon]

They are surely more beautiful a little further off. :D

[SJ Mullins]

Nice splashes of ink, Pryde. Loved this, and like, Josie, the manta ray poem as well. Will be back for more as time permits. Have a great week, my friend!~

[Pryde Foltz]

So glad you came by. Thank you, SJ:)

[SJ Mullins]

My pleasure as always. :)

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

Love the presentation of spider and I really like the manta ray poem.

[Pryde Foltz]

Thanks so much, Josie:)

[Vatsal Rohilla (account..]

This is exquisitely well-written and exquisitely presented. You are a great poet. Keep writing.

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

You are welcome!

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Vatsal:)

[Nia Lisa]

Very thoughtful poem! Some things are beyond our comprehension as humans

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Nia. I am not sure we are meant to worry about that which is beyond comprehension. let things come as your tread forward:)