Tic Toc Tic

A Heartrending write about when it is time to get over it:)

Published in Strays

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Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

I always like listening to your voice. melodic as it is. Love the poem
Tate

[Pryde Foltz]

Thanks so much, Tate. Some good blood returning today:)

[Tate Morgan]

I agree so like seeing the old crew back again I cant tell you how I have waited for that

[Pryde Foltz]

If we could lure a little pickle back it would be a perfect day:)

[Tate Morgan]

lol i wish frienda would come back

[Vatsal Rohilla (account..]

This poem made my day. I ended with a wide smile upon my face. If you can make a person smile and feel happy, then the purpose of your writing is fulfilled. Pretty amazingly inked. Keep writing.

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Vatsal. For me poetry is about healing and so I love your words:)

[Baby Ricochet]

Sad dogs make me weepy every time. Good one.

[Pryde Foltz]

You made my day, Baby. So nice to see you back here. You have been missed, for sure:):):)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

crying is good...have to let it out...but shed the tears and then get over it...move on...learn from the experience...and then let out a scream, or step on a cat's toes and let her scream for you.

[Pryde Foltz]

Nah ... I would never step on a cat's toe ... she would get me in my sleep. LOL. Thank you, Jacob:)

[Einstein Noodle]

thanks for the giggle ...and the smile on me face! be proud of me Pryde! ;) ..i waited for the cat .. i believed in you ;) love the music and old style film ...reminded me of a scene in Tombstone during the play sequence and the "projectionist" shook liquid filled colored bottles in front of stage lights to achieve different effects ... great stuff says i! sometimes its a really good friend that kicks us in the pants to stop with the sniveling .. after years it is time to live on :) and i enjoy the humorous way you have said it
E.

[Pryde Foltz]

Thanks E. This one is a shorter one and so it allowed me the time to push the creative boat out. Believe it or not this is the first poem wrote and post online. And we owe to Sami because he refused to read my prose ... a glass of rose and it all began:)

[Einstein Noodle]

isn't this a wonderful Cafe? ..in which we push each other outside familiar bounds ... your pic is quite impressive my friend ...you big cry baby! you are missing some tear streaked mascara for greater effect however ... :)))

[Pryde Foltz]

Yes ... that would have made it .... where were you when I was taking the picture:)

[Einstein Noodle]

:) ................... i'm everywhere of course ;)

[andrew mitchell]

Haha Very clever, witty and the music so sad with the story building under Tic Toc Tic on getting over it, I was expecting her to spill her drink lol. An amusing piece of intrigue, to open for more I think.:)

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Andrew ... not an out and out spill ... maybe a lip dribble:):):)

[wordman]

this is certainly a unique and un expected write ! loved it .

[Pryde Foltz]

Thanks Ron. I hope it gave you a giggle:)