Not-to-be-Gotten ... Spoken word and visuals

Not-to-be-Gotten ... Spoken word and visuals

A Poem by Pryde Foltz
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For the birds that got away and cats cats cats

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© 2016 Pryde Foltz


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Writing poetry with dead birds. I like it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Pryde Foltz

7 Years Ago

The birds aren't dead ... lol ... just missing a few feathers:):):) My birds are always out-smarting.. read more
I had two cats. Each shared their barf skills for me quite often but each had their own character traits that served them well. Whether jumping from behind the couch an accosting my leg or finding it comfortable to sleep on my stomach I remember them well. The playfulness and the mischief behavior made them both funny people with fur.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Pryde Foltz

7 Years Ago

Cats are truly wonderful beings. Thank you, Grey:):):)
Ah the epitome of indifference and survival, well done, good read my darling.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Pryde Foltz

7 Years Ago

Thank you, Thomas:)
Came across a kitty last night but was right on in avoiding its new life. Your taste in entertainment offers visual tickles, wise laughter and a triumph In musical background.

What a pleasure to know you Pryde!

Regards,
Al

Posted 7 Years Ago


Pryde Foltz

7 Years Ago

Thank you, Al. I really love what I do:):):)
Alfred Kukitz

7 Years Ago

It shows like your beautiful face.
a lovely write depicting the attitude of cats. i adore cats, british shorthairs are my fav's. the music was a great choice too. an entertaining fun read.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Pryde Foltz

7 Years Ago

Thank you, Andrew:)
very much enjoyed ...:) great advice for all disciples of the pen ... some days just aren't meant for catching the bird ...especially enjoyed "clever little glutton" ...i do not have cats but i do have a lot of respect for their regal-ness
E.
ps fine work with music and pics and font ...all good says i!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Einstein Noodle

7 Years Ago

for sure ...my sister had cats when we were growing up .. both were long haired,bushy tailed Empress.. read more
Pryde Foltz

7 Years Ago

The thing about cats ... is they love crap of themselves ... in that way they are an inspiration:)
Einstein Noodle

7 Years Ago

:) ....................
As a cat, I am deeply offended (sort of) actually, it's pretty darned cute, and funny. So in the meantime, I must share this. When I lived in your neck of the woods, I had an old declawed cat I adopted from a shelter. I used to tie her up outside while I read a book in my apartment building yard. The lady upstairs got mad because my cat caught birds while I sat and did nothing to stop her. My logic was simple. Survival of the fittest. I had a 6 pound, 13 year old declawed cat on an 8 foot lead. If a bird was stupid enough to taunt her, he deserved his fate.:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Pryde Foltz

7 Years Ago

Tee hee ... I agree. But I imagine any cat of yours would be bad-a*s ... next time add a blindfold a.. read more
Lyn Anderson

7 Years Ago

I lived in New West, a long time ago -- moved back to Ontario in 99. That kitty lived to be 23.
Pryde Foltz

7 Years Ago

Wow ... good show:)
Love your presentation. You come up with something entertaining, amusing and enlightening at the same time

Posted 7 Years Ago


Pryde Foltz

7 Years Ago

Thank you, Avinash:)
When a series of events- a story- is presented in the form of poetry, its beauty is enhanced further. Take "The Rime of the Ancient Mariner" for example, such poems engage the reader more and have some peculiar feelings in them which other poems usually don't have. This tale is simply amazing. What a smooth flow you have got and how you capture the mind of the listener. Perfect work. Keep writing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Pryde Foltz

7 Years Ago

Thank you, Vatsal:)
yet another fabolus story about two old friends,loved it

Posted 7 Years Ago


Pryde Foltz

7 Years Ago

Thank you, Ron:)

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Added on July 28, 2016
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Pryde Foltz

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