Gravity Takes the Stand, spoken word to Intractable

Gravity Takes the Stand, spoken word to Intractable

A Poem by Pryde Foltz
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What follows is an attempt 2 keep ego punch drunk & in love. Should b watched w/ ur tongue firmly against ur cheek. If u r afraid of heights, watch w/ a parachute & please share a selfie

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Gravity Takes the Stand is published in Monsters






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© 2016 Pryde Foltz



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I enjoyed this poem. Nice music to go with positive thoughts. Thank you for sharing the amazing verbal poetry dear Pryde.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


Pryde Foltz

1 Year Ago

Thanks so much, John:):):)
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

You are welcome dear Pryde.
The presence that keeps us sane and grounded, a most unique and pleasant piece.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Pryde Foltz

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Thomas:):):)
Haha the title suggested aging but not quite. The pros and cons of gravity that keep you in your place. Clever lovely write

Posted 1 Year Ago


Pryde Foltz

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Andrew:):):)
gravity,the master of the universe,what else could keep us in our place

Posted 1 Year Ago


Pryde Foltz

1 Year Ago

Indeed. Thanks Ron:)
Feeling a little jazzed about the universe its to bad gravity holds you down. You soar in my world!

Regards,
Al

Posted 1 Year Ago


Pryde Foltz

1 Year Ago

Or perhaps Gravity holds you just were you need to be .... thanks Al:)
haha, even the music sets the scene somehow. I've known....correction, I know people like this. I've often wondered if they ever knew I was involved in something as well. They seem to think the universe revolves around them as the moon doe in your video.

Always a pleasure you cute thing. :)

100 ;)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Pryde Foltz

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Grey. Loving the new avatar ...suits the name;) My belief our own personal universe do re.. read more
Gray

1 Year Ago

I haven't drown once yet. :) Good point btw.
ahahaha ..yes gravity does have a say .. i was playing "monster with my 4 yr old grandson a couple years ago and we were having such fun as he chased me (monster all around the house .. i slipped up to the deck hoping to hide from him behind the grill but he rounded the corner just in time to catch me ..so in my 12 yr old mode i leaped over the rail to the asphalt of the driveway below blowing out my 65yr old right knee and shoulder :{ ..Norma took my cape away as a result so ....no more flying for me ... :0 another well done presentation .. especially enjoyed the flight path of the moon .. makes my heart want to leap once more
E.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Pryde Foltz

1 Year Ago

You forgot you rocket boots ... sounds like you had fun despite the pain ... win ... lol. Thanks E:).. read more
Einstein Noodle

1 Year Ago

oh yeah!? the rocket boots ..only meant to use once ..then self destruct ;} i did have fun in spit o.. read more
Amazing !! ''She learnt long ago, a good defence was no offence !!''

I can't tell you how much I loved it.Thank You for sharing :)!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Pryde Foltz

1 Year Ago

Ahhh ... that took me a minute. You are referring to the short story that follows. Yes Mona and the .. read more
zaisham9393

1 Year Ago

Yeah...it was awesome :))! I love your work dear friend :)!
A masterful take on the ego and the need to control it with your magical voice presentation and witty snapshots. You are a master at these things....:).......................

Posted 1 Year Ago


Pryde Foltz

1 Year Ago

Very kind. Thank you, Sami:):):)
Sami Khalil

1 Year Ago

You are welcome muchly. ....:))........

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Added on August 17, 2016
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Pryde Foltz
Pryde Foltz

Vancouver, Canada



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