Nothing, Everything

Some experiences can never be put into words and lifetimes can exist in a single moment...

When I look at you, I see inside you.

Your pupils are like black holes; an inescapable force that not even light can resist.

I am past the point of no return, falling weightlessly into the mysterious beyond.

On the other side I see myself. I see you. We are together.

We do everything, we do nothing.

Whatever it is, or is not, we are together.

As our lifetime flashes before me, I am nudged out of my trance at your command.

There are your eyes again; the windows to the soul I've just witnessed conjoined with mine in that alternate reality.

They sparkle like gems, piercing mine as though they acknowledge what I have seen.

We have just shared something that cannot be expressed.

So we just stare, savoring the moment.

It never happened, it just happened.

We've shared nothing, we've shared everything.

Reviews

[Sheila Marie Carr]

This is really a great write. I do believe that lifetimes can exist in a single moment, for some of us thats all we have...."Nothing, Everything".

[Jessica]

awww this was soo cute and it flows with such easeee! very vividd! love it nicely done!

[CircusNerd]

this is was extraordinary. the vividness of the word choice was perfect like a cool breeze, and i love that you did this in blue to exemplify such a perfectly pristine bond with someone. good job!

[barricade]

one word...Mystifying! highly intriguing! Loved it!

great work!
Keep it up!

Barricade...

[Jola]

hmm .... interesting poem ... it stimulates the imagination and leads to reflection.
Greetings Jola

[.Bunnie.]

I have to admit to just a little envy of being that closely connected with...someone. I think you captured a moment very well, as well as any moment can be captured by words--which says a lot. :) Great job, sweet boy...as always.

[funeralmoon]

this was really good very complex and spellbinding...