Becoming Me

Becoming Me

A Poem by Raveness

Becoming me has been a long treacherous journey
It was difficult to discover what was beautiful within me
My face is not symmetrical
My hair is rarely perfect
I am a far cry from graceful
But as if what passed through me was an electrical current
I now see my bright big blue eyes
My curving and mature body
The way when the sun is setting I stop to admire the sky
My voice right after I've been crying
 I am not beautiful in the conventional way 
but in my own unique way
Becoming me has had it's ups and downs 
but finding the beauty in myself has made me see the beauty in everything
Even the rain in the clouds

© 2015 Raveness


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I liked the logic of this poem.
"Becoming me has had it's ups and downs
but finding the beauty in myself has made me see the beauty in everything
Even the rain in the clouds"
I believe we learn wisdom when we learn to accept ourselves. Nice journey led to very good ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote



Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raveness

8 Years Ago

You are just lovely!!!
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

You are very kind. I enjoyed your poetry.



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I LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS!!!!!! I know that it has taken time for me to find myself and what makes me beautiful!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Raveness, Becoming who you have become is a never-ending process, filled with checkpoints along the way...over smooth roads and potholed terror rides...the process. The fact that you take the time for introspection, an honest self-examination, the awareness to notice that your voice right after crying may have different things to say, in a slightly different tone. I think that this piece shows a lot of the real you and alerts me to the talent you have expressing same. Again, nice to meet ya! take care...dan

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I liked the logic of this poem.
"Becoming me has had it's ups and downs
but finding the beauty in myself has made me see the beauty in everything
Even the rain in the clouds"
I believe we learn wisdom when we learn to accept ourselves. Nice journey led to very good ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote



Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raveness

8 Years Ago

You are just lovely!!!
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

You are very kind. I enjoyed your poetry.
This is truly inspiring. I love the personal feel to the poem. It flows very nicely. I can't say enough how much I love the positive vibe in this. We are look at ourselves, and focus way to much on what's wrong. Great job! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


It is little known, but the key to life's happiness is to be happy with one's self....nicely done :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Becoming ourselves is a Never-ending journey.

Great job in desribing this painful yet worthwhile season.....:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raveness

8 Years Ago

Thank you love :)
it is true sometime beauty lies in the eyes of others but it is not always true ..beauty is that what you see within yourself ..what completes you as a human being your emotions ,attitude,love,generous ,and of course the person who like you the way you are ...not relating humanwith rational thinking

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raveness

8 Years Ago

Uhm not sure how to respond but thank you for reading :)
Wow!
Very well written and it touched me,
Can I just say though, you have potential!
My favorite part was, "Becoming me has been a long treacherous journey
It was difficult to discover what was beautiful within me
My face is not symmetrical
My hair is rarely perfect"
Please continue to write and read!
Can you by chance look at my story The Blonde Girl, It would really mean a lot to me.
Your new fan,

C. Lee Battaglia


Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raveness

8 Years Ago

This brought me to tears! Thank you so much!!! Of course I will read it!
C. Lee Battaglia

8 Years Ago

Your welcome... I really like your style of writing and my goal is to make someone happy each day, i.. read more
That's quite a good way to look at things. The discovery of your own beauty can be a real eye-opener and reflect your life in a new and positive way you never thought possible. Good for you.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Raveness

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much! It's been hard but I love my new outlook

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