Passion Filled The Night

Thanks Kelley!

He was a stranger

to me

the forbidden

and unknown

personified

into flesh.

 

A man

unlike any

I had known

strong yet

pale and

insubstantial

as rolling mists.

 

His eyes

they pierced me

and saw

everything

deep withing

my soul.

 

He was

the darkness

and

I was

by some

unseen thread

of desire

drawn

to him.

 

Strange

that he and I

should meet

Darkness

and the

Night

joined

unconsciencely.

 

His touch

like cold

fire

burned away

inhibitions

and fuled

the rage

of lust.

 

The moment

became

a madness

that left me

on the

brink

and passion

filled the

night.

Author's Note

This was created from something Kelley said in a review of my piece Lovers 2.

Reviews

[poetic soul]

He was
the darkness
and
I was
by some
unseen thread
of desire
drawn
to him.

whhhhhhooaaa!!! amazing piece of work there lady....i jus loved the read.....the way its typed also, adds to the concept!

:) Smiles,
Poetic Soul

[Kelley]

I love it! You used those words just right....smiles
I never knew a comment could inspire beauty.
Your words flowed gently over my tongue like
water from a babbling brook.

Thanks for sharing Beth.

Kelley

[Fran Marie]

The moment
became
a madness
that left me
on the
brink
and passion
filled the
night.


Quite lovely this is~and so beautifully penned

THanks for sharing it in the contest

Fran Marie

[Honeypot]

This has a beautiful and breathtaking quality to it. I loved "Darkness and the Night joined". Great poem!

[Crazy Cat Man]

sexy :D